love this story, so weird & unhinged & fun. the writing is lovely and the characters are lovely! hope all is well!

miss u

Beautiful, beautiful writing. Anxiously waiting for more. It's not just the interesting story with its sci fi bent, or the slash (interesting as it is with these odd characters, that's obviously not the focus here and no loss for it) or the fabulous characters in all their weirdness, its the turn of a phrase, the descriptive twists, the tightly tuned musings...in all, I'm here for the quality of the writing

Wow, was this painful as hell to read. I'm afraid to click to the next chapter and only hope there's no long delay for a happy ending. It WILL have a happy ending, right? Hello? Please say it will, i need a happy Molly and a healthy Col and a healed Walker...oh, and a very dead Sire. Pretty please.

So excited you've taken this back up! I'm rereading it now and can hardly wait to catch up! Thank you for coming back to this fantastically weird tale!

Fabulous, weird, hilarious dystopian slash fiction! I'm soooo happy with this story! Thank you for feeding my brain and soul with intelligent, sexy, thought provoking, humorous entertainment. I LOVE this story!

Where've you been?
Tripped out sex... leave it to you to make it a LOL experience. :D

Wow. Did not see that coming.

Never too late to update _

Disjointed as all heck n I love it. More plz? Xxxx

I've really enjoyed reading this so far and I hope you're planning to continue it at some point. Your writing style is fun to read and your world building is fun and realistic.
As for which pairings. Thresome? Lol. Probably Molly /Walker, but I'd like to read Molly /col, just cause, and why not some Walker/Iggy for shits and giggles too

Hehe. Molly/Col 3

[E. fucking coli] I love this, that's so clever!

[a casual pervert and flashing when it fancies] Gah, you have such a way with words!

On that note, I think it’s amazing how you depict Molly’s typical nonchalant attitude that slowly but surely fades as the situation looks to be more dangerous. I think he has seriously changed since he was first introduced.

I like the line about Molly saying it’s the first time they’ve gotten as far in the “let’s fire Molly” game. I feel like he’s finally realizing how serious the situation is, but still hanging to a thread of hope that it’s all a game.

I was kind of curious about how Molly doesn’t know he’s achieved Three status. To my understanding, he and Vari have hacked the systems plenty of times right? So even if most people don’t know their Security level, wouldn’t they know? Unless the fact that they have cushier jobs deterred them from ever even checking their level?

I love how you describe the effects of Virtual. I can feel the dreamy, euphoric quality in Molly’s narration. Also, I totally did not expect Molly and Walker to get with each other first! Though I suppose it’s all drug induced, and so doesn’t negate the possibly more genuine attraction Col and Molly might have for each other. *throws hands up in the air* I don’t know! I feel like there’s massive chemistry/sexual tension between all your major characters, so I’m just going with it, haha.

Cool that we see Sire from Molly’s perspective for the first time. Great timing (not for Molly, though ;P) with her arrival. I feel like the pieces are coming together, but not yet fitting together, so they’re still a lot of mystery about exactly what’s going on.

I was intrigued by the comment about Sire’s skin. It’s like she can Col are so altered that they’re not quite human. Especially since in the last chapter, Walker dreams about Molly’s skin coming in ribbons—that seems like something that’s not even metaphorically possible for Sire and Col. So yeah, I’m definitely in the bit about the skin.

Awesome chapter!

Hi hi from the review game!

Boy it’s been awhile.

[strips of dream-Molly skin…] I love how your imagery is bizarre and intimate at the same time. There’s an aspect of it that’s a little dreamily sickening (in a good way, I swear!) that’s perfect for your world, which, I think is quite wispy/dreamy scary. That you focus on skin touching skin also gives the impression of how close Molly and Col are, even from Walker’s perspective, so it’s kind of warm and fuzzy at the same time.

I also like how each character is starting to realize for himself that the reality of Soma is perhaps much more frightening than they already thought. Even though they’re expert hackers and fairly well off, they’re in inescapable danger too.

(PS, lemme know if you're still interested in trading reviews because I certainly am!)

Good story. _