Reviews for Two Proposals
Eeliab8 chapter 1 . 10/15/2013
Wow that is a really good scene. It says a lot for only being so short! I really liked it. It's really good! good job!
radiant beauty chapter 1 . 10/11/2013
LOL! this is great!

my favorite line is - What were you expecting girl, an actual raven?
i also liked - Kevin's line - Let me get you a drink (Ariana punches his arm) Ow! Or not!

keep writing and i'll be sure to read!