Reviews for Second Chances
dee chapter 1 . 10/14/2013
whose secnd chances? kennedy or alana? nice job, now you make me visit your profile everyday for knowing you already updating or not.
your bio is one of my bookmark. :)

what is my favorite thing? my family, chocolate and watching korean drama. but now I'm getting fatter and if I eat too much chocolate, ugly pimples will pop up to my face. a lot of ugly pimples and it's not cute. at all.
White Rose Blossom chapter 1 . 10/14/2013
Loved it! Always great to see new things from you. Can't wait to see where it's going...I have my ideas but Alana's presence threw a twist in my original thoughts anyway. Looking forward to part 2!
K chapter 1 . 10/14/2013
You're back! So freaking happy! You will always be one of my favorite writers in FP, and it's an absolute joy to see an update from you. 3

P.S: I miss The Classics of Love! (No pressure, love) :p
dee chapter 1 . 10/14/2013
Please, please post no. 2 soon.
I'm hooked. Lol

Loved it!
DuchessYappingDog chapter 1 . 10/13/2013
I can't wait until part 2! Oh I wonder if he is final realizing what he's had all along. Stop pining for the past and see the present. Or I guess now it's the recent past.

I hope more drama happens before they're together again! Love reading it in stories... But hate drama in real life.
Canada 1 chapter 1 . 10/13/2013
Love it. I wish you had plans for something longer.

Is the epilogue for Brown Eyes still in the works?
castiel89 chapter 1 . 10/13/2013
Oh good lord. You left us there?! You have me torn. I really want him to find happiness with Kennedy, because from the way people talk about them together, they were definitely right for each other, age difference be damned.

And the you have Alana and my heart hurts for her and thinks, geeze. Maybe these two that have been burned in their last relationship in some way, are the TRUE right ones for each other. And if he could get really have that closure from Kennedy, he'd realize how much he and Alana have moved into each other's lives.

I love you and I hate you at the same time for all these feels.

Colleen chapter 1 . 10/13/2013
Not bothered to login in, so this is the most convenient thing to do.

I really like this. Usually I don't feel that attached to characters that are introduced later on - i.e. Alana - but I actually really like her here. So that's great!

Ummm, my favorite thing in the world? Excluding people, I think the stars. Because they're a sign of infinity and hope and dreams. To quote Oscar Wilde: "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." Hope that helps somehow! :)
ess3sandra chapter 1 . 10/13/2013
Alana should tell Mack what she is actually feeling! Is she pregnant or sick in cancer?
Damned to heaven chapter 1 . 10/13/2013
Whenever I read a book the first female character introduced is the one I usually like and side with because authors usually introduce those main characters right at the beginning. In this story, I like Alana more than Kennedy, I mean not because we had Alana's, Kennedy sounded great but Alana, well she just reeks of strong feisty female.
fiery lily chapter 1 . 10/13/2013
Your writing is marvelous as ever! I can't wait for part 2 :)
gulistala chapter 1 . 10/13/2013
Oh yay! Can't wait to read part 1. It's good to read from you again.

My most favourite thing? Going to the seaside, breathing in the salty air and listening to the waves softly crash against the shoreline. D
Guest chapter 1 . 10/12/2013
This is sooooo good. I really love Alana. I can't wait for the second part.
cerulean-azure chapter 1 . 10/12/2013
Favourite thing in the word... finishing a good story and feeling at peace with the world. Especially if I've had a bad day, or had my emotions thrown out of whack.

I loved part one, and I'm glad you somehow made it back to the shores of fictionpress :)
LondonLi chapter 1 . 10/12/2013
I love your long one-shots! And I hope to read more of this great snippet. You are so good at creating characters and worlds that totally suck me in. And right now, one of my most favorite things in the world are Starbucks Pumpkin Spice Latte's. Totally comforting and something I look forward to every autumn.
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