Reviews for The Family of Ragnarok
Kaitlin chapter 1 . 1/29/2014
This is awesome!Sa ses tres formidable
logan89 chapter 3 . 1/20/2014
Hel making a alliance with Jotunheim to battle against Asgard. You did a good job explaining Hel's negative emotions she feels toward the All Father Odin. Their combine forces against the golden realm sounds like a glorious battle. Thor and Odin battling side by side for the good of the nine realms against this new evil alliance will be put to the test. Looking forward to see how you bring all this together.
logan89 chapter 2 . 1/15/2014
Balder dying and being in Hel's grip signing the end of all. The Odinson being under her control her dangerous for the rest of the nine realms. Thor being married to Sif with their two sons pending the upcoming battle. The emotional farewell that Thor gives his family is written very well, and shows the true essence of a caring father trying to protect his family. Good story/plot foundation being laid down in this chapter, looking forward to seeing what happens next.
logan89 chapter 1 . 1/10/2014
This was a nice story about Asgard and all the while I was reading I kept wondering what is the secret that made your father hide all of you? Great descriptions in this chapter and your story was consistent following your plot lines all the way to the end. Baldr's arrival signaling the beginning of Ragnarok makes me want to know what happens next. Looking forward to reading the next chapter, you have a set a nice foundation from which to build from.