Reviews for Lunch atop a Skyscraper
starry3y3dangel chapter 27 . 5/24
It was such a pleasant surprise to see your update for this story. It has been a while and every so often I would check back and re-read some of your stories. you're one of my fave authors here on FP and hope life is treating you well.

Glad to see them both at a better place one year later. Hopefully the next update won't take a year ;)
Guest chapter 27 . 4/20
I didn't see the email notification that you'd updated, but I go back to your stories occasionally to re-read them, and seeing a new chapter made my heart explode! I ended up re-reading the whole story again and liked it even more the second time around.

I also really liked Abigail and her tentative friendship with Violet - they're truly two fantastic young women and I'm invested in a happy ending for both of them.
quibbler149 chapter 27 . 4/12
Wow. Wow wow wow. I didn't get an email notification but I checked this story like I do periodically every month for the last few years and I can't believe that you updated. This has made me so incredibly happy. Thank you.

To be honest, I wasn't totally sure how I wanted the aftermath of the night from the previous chapter to play out and I'm relieved that you did a time skip. I think having some time lapse to give them both some space and allow Violet to grow her confidence in herself was a great choice. I'm so glad that it was her decision to reconnect with Andrew so she can retain that agency for herself. She's not passively waiting anymore - she's making things happen now.

I'm really excited to see what comes next in this era for Andrew and Violet's story together. After all the miscommunication and indecision between them, it will be interesting to see the different dynamics in their new relationship. I'm looking forward to getting to know them after a year of growth.

Thank you again, you have no idea how much I have been hoping for an update. I never gave up hope that I could read the end of their story!
anon chapter 27 . 4/5
omg i'm so happy you updated! you're my favorite author here. the time skip fits and i'm happy olive matured without adam, but i still want them to be together now that she has grown but they still evidently have feelings for each other. also liked the parallel with her and abigail (the pics adam has of their time together, them leaving adam...) loved this!
frouwe chapter 27 . 4/3
Sooo nice to see you update this, I love your Williams extended family universe
Guest chapter 27 . 3/31
I have been following this story for years and I wanted to let you know, it is so good and I hope you finish it!
yaraaaa chapter 27 . 3/15
AHHHHHHHH I never would’ve expected you to come back to this story! But i’m so happy that you did. I read the last chapter and decided to reread the entire thing again. Quite shocked at the time skip but I feel like it slightly fits. I’ll write up a better review after my reread. But I am really happy that you came back to this story. Hope you are doing well!
brunique chapter 1 . 6/22/2020
I’ve been following this Author and story for the last decade and I’m still here 5 years later hoping for an update x please finish the story
Kay chapter 26 . 4/26/2020
Hi. Just want to let you I am still checking for any kind of update occasionally, just in case there’s something with email notification. I also reread your other stories because it feels good reading well written stories and you are my favorite author. Please keep writing. Thank you.
Mikariangel chapter 26 . 7/30/2019
Hello! Dont know if you still check this or if you're still writing, but just wanted to say that I love this story! The character development and plot are all amazing:))) keep writing! Also would love to see something from Andrew's POV
Guest chapter 26 . 5/5/2019
Are you going to finish this book?
Du chapter 25 . 12/28/2018
So, I just reread this again, because once you start with a Williams kick, you just have to finish with them all. I had forgotten how much this story moved me- as much as I love all the other Williams’ stories (including The Catch!) this one is so profound and complex that it pulls at all my strings, and not just because of all the photography (for which I am a sucker), but because of how difficult and real everything seems and how well you manage to convey it all. Violet is so normal that it is extremely easy to relate to her... Damn. I love this one so much! Because of Violet, because of Andrew and Abigail, because of Paul, and because of all the Williams and how well they interact with each other (such an endearing family!). I cannot express well enough how impressive I find what you have done with all these characters, and how brilliant I find your writing. I keep wishing you finish this story, but even if you don’t I’m quite happy with everything as it is, because even if Violet’s happy ending is not here yet (and even though I really need her to have one), their relationship right now is too flawed and imperfect- and that is real, very real. So if you ever add on to this story, I hope you continue with this line of writing: their relationship is so full of mistakes on both parts that it has a lot to go through yet before they get anywhere ‘happy’- if they do get there. But that’s just my take, whatever you decide to do with this story, whether you make them fix it all quickly, draw out the angst or even make Andrew go back to Abigail- I would be really happy to read and review. And if you don’t continue this- well that’s our loss, really.
Sorry for such long review, I just really wanted to show some appreciation for your writing.
I hope life is giving you everything you want from it. Happy holidays! :)
REGRETABLE chapter 26 . 10/30/2018
Ughhhh - I love this. Seriously love it. I hope you decide to update!
REGRETABLE chapter 9 . 10/29/2018
Ok, so far - LOVE THIS. the only thing I didn't care for was this idea that she's "fallen for him" and all of her reasons are very self centered. 'andrew told me not to let my sister get to me, Andrew saved me while I was drunk' - although they do show a few good characteristics Andrew is made of, she really doesn't know much about him - it would have been amazing to hear her talk about who he is as a man, or the actual character in those actions. It just felt like she was so focused on what he was doing for her or what he can bring to her, versus who he is as an individual. If you do ever decide to edit or revise this story, I would hope you would amend that, and maybe add in some more moments where she can get to know him as a whole.

I really love this story though- it's adorable and sweet.
Jean chapter 26 . 8/17/2018
Just wanted to drop by and say I've really enjoyed this story. I read it while I was going through a tough time and it provided a much needed escape. I hope it will be finished one day so that I can know the ending.
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