|Reviews for Lunch atop a Skyscraper|
| Guest chapter 23 . 5h
please pretty please update
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/25
Can you give us an update on twitter about how the next chapter is going?
| pulsedistraction chapter 23 . 5/25
I'm so glad that I found this gem! It's so rare to read very well written stories here in fictionpress and I think this is just one of the best. I love the character development of Violet. I'm so glad she finally stood up to Josephine! Although now that she's going back to Tennessee I wonder if she can still find the courage to confront her parents. I think it's doubly hard to stood up to parents. Anyway, yay Violet! :-)
Now having read some of the reviews here, it seems Andrew isn't so favored right now. Though I have to say, I do understand where he's coming from. Seeing a special someone from the past with no closure AND having a new someone who he might be potentially in love with, that's really tough. To think that he was so used to getting his ways so easily before, getting trapped like this is really heavy. Coz whatever his choice will be, he'll have to hurt someone he cares about. But still, I hope he fights for Violet.
I feel so much for this girl, honestly. Getting used to hearing no from the start, from her family and the environment she grew up in, I feel like Violet just let Andrew go because she thought she won't win this. Again. :( I hope Andrew realizes this when they spend time together in Vi’s hometown and then ultimately decide that she's the one worth fighting for.
Also, I am liking Chris so much! Is there more to him in this story?
I'm really REALLY looking forward to the next chapter! Awesome job at this story! :-)
| Guest chapter 23 . 5/20
I love the twist of this chapter! Andrew, you sneaky guy. Though I'm still mad at him, I'm excited to see how this plays out.
My expectations: lots of groveling from Andrew, and Violet rejecting him. He should prove himself.
| Welcome to the Carnival chapter 23 . 5/19
Really liking this story so far! Violet's character development is pretty damn great, and I love this chapter's plot twist :) Please update soon!
| C chapter 23 . 5/9
Tbh, violet doesn't deserve Andrew's bullshit. He's toying with her and is so flip floppy it's unfair and self centred of him. And I don't like that people like Chris are trying to convince violet to be easy on Andrew and give him a shot. Disappearing for a week when Abigail shows up, RIGHT after beginning a romance with Violet?! That's so shady.
Im thankful violet stood up for herself, though. But her conversation with Chris had me thinking she'll take Andrew back with no problem. And now Andrews using his power to pin Violet into a job with him because he knows she won't turn down the opportunity...ugh I HOPE Andrew really redeems himself because right now, Violet deserves to be the one who got away from him. She deserves to move on from him.
Sorry this sounds so critical...I do like the story
One little thing: when Chris met up with Violet at the restaurant, he called her Kayla. Unless I read wrong, I think that's a typo :)
| anime09 chapter 23 . 5/4
As always, this is fantastic. I can't wait to see what's ahead for her.
| Guest chapter 23 . 5/3
| xXmacchi-tan chapter 23 . 5/2
I'm so frustrated with Andrew but at the same time I'm looking forward to their confrontation. Please update soon :)
| Guest chapter 23 . 5/2
can't wait for next chapter. please update.
| Guest chapter 23 . 5/1
| flanerie chapter 23 . 4/30
"He chuckled softly" .. So he is interested in her? I defs think he would go for it if it weren't for Andrew, or could end up liking her the more he gets to know her and vice versa. I think Chris would be good for her
| Guest chapter 23 . 4/25
Andrew, you are a sad, strange little man, and you have my pity.
That was from Buzz Lightyear, by the way.
| Guest chapter 23 . 4/25
Ferb, I know what we're gonna do today! (We'll kill Andrew). Meh.
| Guest chapter 18 . 4/24
Jerk. Idiot. Why don't you go and invite Abigail to the wedding since you're so eager to see her.