Reviews for Lunch atop a Skyscraper |
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![]() ![]() ![]() So many feelings, I felt such anger with the scenes with her parents, and then she mentioned Abigail, I mean I get her, but still. I want to read the next chapter so much and see what happenes next. I want them to talk openly about Abigail and for him to tell her what's going on. |
![]() ![]() just read on twitter that your next update is ready. please update soon! can't wait |
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![]() ![]() I'm so glad that I found this gem! It's so rare to read very well written stories here in fictionpress and I think this is just one of the best. I love the character development of Violet. I'm so glad she finally stood up to Josephine! Although now that she's going back to Tennessee I wonder if she can still find the courage to confront her parents. I think it's doubly hard to stood up to parents. Anyway, yay Violet! :-) Now having read some of the reviews here, it seems Andrew isn't so favored right now. Though I have to say, I do understand where he's coming from. Seeing a special someone from the past with no closure AND having a new someone who he might be potentially in love with, that's really tough. To think that he was so used to getting his ways so easily before, getting trapped like this is really heavy. Coz whatever his choice will be, he'll have to hurt someone he cares about. But still, I hope he fights for Violet. I feel so much for this girl, honestly. Getting used to hearing no from the start, from her family and the environment she grew up in, I feel like Violet just let Andrew go because she thought she won't win this. Again. :( I hope Andrew realizes this when they spend time together in Vi’s hometown and then ultimately decide that she's the one worth fighting for. Also, I am liking Chris so much! Is there more to him in this story? I'm really REALLY looking forward to the next chapter! Awesome job at this story! :-) |
![]() ![]() I love the twist of this chapter! Andrew, you sneaky guy. Though I'm still mad at him, I'm excited to see how this plays out. My expectations: lots of groveling from Andrew, and Violet rejecting him. He should prove himself. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really liking this story so far! Violet's character development is pretty damn great, and I love this chapter's plot twist :) Please update soon! |
![]() ![]() Tbh, violet doesn't deserve Andrew's bullshit. He's toying with her and is so flip floppy it's unfair and self centred of him. And I don't like that people like Chris are trying to convince violet to be easy on Andrew and give him a shot. Disappearing for a week when Abigail shows up, RIGHT after beginning a romance with Violet?! That's so shady. Im thankful violet stood up for herself, though. But her conversation with Chris had me thinking she'll take Andrew back with no problem. And now Andrews using his power to pin Violet into a job with him because he knows she won't turn down the opportunity...ugh I HOPE Andrew really redeems himself because right now, Violet deserves to be the one who got away from him. She deserves to move on from him. Sorry this sounds so critical...I do like the story One little thing: when Chris met up with Violet at the restaurant, he called her Kayla. Unless I read wrong, I think that's a typo :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() As always, this is fantastic. I can't wait to see what's ahead for her. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I'm so frustrated with Andrew but at the same time I'm looking forward to their confrontation. Please update soon :) |
![]() ![]() can't wait for next chapter. please update. |
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