Reviews for Lunch atop a Skyscraper
RayGasan chapter 23 . 4/20/2015
Andrew, you sneaky little bastard! You just HAD to do that, hadn't you?
skye real chapter 23 . 4/20/2015
And here they go again... well at least Andrew is taking the initiative to get in contact with her. But i think he needs to man up more and get more aggressive in pursuing her if he's really interested in Violet. I still like Vi snd Chris' scenes together. They should go on a date just to provoke Andrew to act up on his feeling. I mean, 2 phone calls and 2 voicemails is not enough in my book. Looking forward to the next update :)
hunter005 chapter 23 . 4/20/2015
Ahh another chapter! Thanks! I really relate to Vi especially in chapter 22 and now. Crazily enough I've been dealin with my own "Josephine" and my own "Andrew". So it's pretty cool to read and really connect with Violets character. Can't wait for the next chapter!
AlwaysBeAUnicorn chapter 23 . 4/20/2015
I am so happy you updated, i really love this story. I can't believe he would interfere with her work like that, I mean I can but still. I love reading your work and I really like your writing style. Can't wait for the next chapter.
ramenrandomness chapter 23 . 4/20/2015
welcome back! the last two sentences made my day, can't wait for her to rip into him, pls pls make her keep her wits and courage with her at the sound of his voice
incognitus chapter 23 . 4/20/2015
Woohoo you updated! I was so glad to receive the new chapter notification that I just did a little jig in the office, haha!

Anyway, I'm so glad to see more plot development between Violet and Andrew. I would have thought Andrew would continue to "sulk" after Violet ignored his texts and voicemails, but it seems like he's spurred into action by rejection and ever-so-sneakily plotting to see Violet again (while giving her a chance to show off her writing chops). Guys, seriously - just tell us how you're feeling! *shakes head in mock dismay*

Andrew was super frustrating in the last chapter though, leaving Violet dangling, so it's nice to see him kind of redeeming himself in this one. Not that Violet would see it that way, I'm sure...

Just one minor typo to point out: during Violet's conversation with Chris, I think you meant to say, "Look, Violet, I normally wouldn't get involved..." instead of Kayla?

Can't wait for you to update soon!

P.S. If you ever need a beta reader, I'll be more than happy to offer my services. :)
ARulzz chapter 23 . 4/20/2015
Finally! You updated. I almost thought you were dead...or at least abandoned the story. When's the next update? Next year? .
Guest chapter 18 . 4/20/2015
This is so frustrating. Rereading this just because I am bored. If I knew Andrew, I'd personally knock on his head.
Guest chapter 17 . 4/20/2015
Ugh, I really, really dislike Andrew for that. It's like he's stringing Violet along. But yeah, this chapter is a turning point.
Guest chapter 23 . 4/20/2015
Omg you updated. Haha. I can't even describe how happy I am when I saw this. XD i smiled widely.

You go, Violet. Give Andrew a hard time. He's such an idiot, but he cares for you. He went out of his way to be able to talk to you. Still, that doesn't lessen the pain you experienced.

They're going to end up together, no doubt about it.

And Chris! He's rad. I hope to see more of him in future chapters.
dee chapter 23 . 4/20/2015
Oh. my. god. Game on! If Andrew thought he'll meet the same Violet as in Yosemite, Andrew would very disappointed.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/19/2015
What happened to your plan to update this weekend?
Guest chapter 22 . 4/18/2015
omg.. update soon please
Guest chapter 22 . 4/16/2015
pleassseeee update sooonnn
Guest chapter 22 . 4/16/2015
omg.. please update... can't wait for it. 3
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