Thank you for taking the time to putting your story together so carefully. I'm drinking in your story and carefully reading each chapter. I appreciate how you elaborate on each character's reaction, emotion, response, and show of body language. It is so realistic of what actually happens when you are at the stage of relation ship where you are trying to bridge the gap for it to become official. I thought that when I read the first chapter that this will be typical plain girl falling massively for an incredibly gorgeous guy, which by the way it is, but you take it up a notch, and not ending up with the all too common storyline of not-so-pretty girl with a ridiculously gorgeous guy. I have so many scenarios that can possibly happen: Chris and Violet, or even Violet and Jason, or Violet with someone at work. Also, Violet working with Ryan at CBS as investigative journalist. Almost impossible not to bump into Andrews at New York City, especially their careers works with each other's, NYT needs a picture and Violet writes the article. I've never been this engrossed in a story before. Usually, I will just read the good parts, but this time, I actually went back and read word for word. Thank you for you time, effort, and careful writing. Beautifully crafted...

Andrew is a douche for even asking Violet to wait for him to decide. She did the right thing by refusing him.

I kind of like how this story is going, because it's a little different from all the other stories out there. This chapter and the previous one ("The Problem") gives me that awkward/uncertain feeling, much like you would feel in real life when you're in that vague, undefinable phase in a relationship or potential relationship. That's why I like this story all the more. I love how you write. The story doesn't come off forced. It flows naturally and at a good pace.

I'm feeling sorry for Violet now that she has to go through this with Andrew, when they were just starting to develop what could be a good relationship. Now I can't wait to find out how you're going to wrap up this story, seeing as there's an unusual bump in the road, in the form of the one who got away from Andrew.

Great turn of events..Proud of Violet for firmly holding her grounds. What if? What if she did go out with Chris Williams instead? However unlikely, Violet can handle Chris. If she can let go of Andrew when she really likes him, she can handle Chris Williams. Just imagine what that will do to Andrew, even though if he chooses Abigail. Either way, I love your story. It is different, and love the way your character Violet is evolving, and finding her voice and courage.

I'm done. I'm just done. I'm going to cry. I want to know what happens next!

Thanks so much for writing! I hope that you keep updating because this story is great. Can't wait to read what happens next!

Hey. I started reading the whole story from the beginning from about 1.5 hours ago and I'm surprised 22 chapters are over. To be honest I really like the way you write and plan your stories. The story is really amazing. How Violet finally decides not to wait for him makes it a bit more real. I hate the stories in which the girl continues to torture herself with her own badly made decisions. I hope you update soon.
Wishing you all the best,
Aarya.

I'm just a pool of emotions reading this story in one go. I love Violet and Andrew together so much even though he's being a jerk now. God! Update fast, I can't seem to wait for it.

I love this story !

Great story. I like the way you have built up your characters and moved the story along. it is good to see Violet standing up for herself. look forward to the next chapters.

I'm glad Violet refused to wait . I saw a quote once that said "if you have to choose between me and someone else, don't choose me". I know you'll probably make them end up together but I don't want them to, Andrew can go back to his Abigail

They should definitely end up together! Oh no after all this don't make separate.. Right now Andrew may not seem unworthy of Violet but just let Andrew make up for all this. Now they are perfect for each other even more so than before.

Well. Well, I have nothing to say to this chapter either. Just kidding, I just wanted to quote your last sentence. Kind of. Sort of. Didn't work.

Loved this, but moving so slowly...(impatient, aren't I?).

You concluded this chapter with me wanting to read the next one.
And it's the worst (feeling ever).

I’m not sure how I feel about this whole situation. Haha. Him seeking her out was pretty adorable, but at the same time, it’s really frustrating. Violet seems to understand WHY he asked that of her instead of being jealous and irrational and completely blowing him off; it was refreshing. I love seeing Andrew vulnerable though. He definitely was at her mercy. And him not pointing out that he’s out of her league and all that… I don’t know. I think that says a lot about his character. I think it really shows how much he really cares for her and only makes it that more believable that he truly CAN’T decide (not that I didn’t believe it before). As much as she may be aware of the disparity between the two, I personally don’t see Andrew feeling like he is in any way above her or better than her as person or because of his social status. He’s just a guy who happens to like a girl (well, two girls – but that’s beside the point).

I’m curious to see how this plays out. She may not wait, but that doesn’t mean he won’t try to stick around until he makes his decision. Especially if he doesn’t want her to write him off. I look forward to more!

And I have to say that a part of me really would like to see her and Chris get together. It would certainly be an interesting pair. Hehe.

I just like this story so much. Please update soon this time. 3

Hello again! We just wanted to add that we don't ship Chris and Vi, because we don't see it. We see them more as friends rather than something romantic. Also,can we request a Chris story, a romance/humor, because we love Chris! 3