Great story. I like the way you have built up your characters and moved the story along. it is good to see Violet standing up for herself. look forward to the next chapters.

I'm glad Violet refused to wait . I saw a quote once that said "if you have to choose between me and someone else, don't choose me". I know you'll probably make them end up together but I don't want them to, Andrew can go back to his Abigail

They should definitely end up together! Oh no after all this don't make separate.. Right now Andrew may not seem unworthy of Violet but just let Andrew make up for all this. Now they are perfect for each other even more so than before.

Well. Well, I have nothing to say to this chapter either. Just kidding, I just wanted to quote your last sentence. Kind of. Sort of. Didn't work.

Loved this, but moving so slowly...(impatient, aren't I?).

You concluded this chapter with me wanting to read the next one.
And it's the worst (feeling ever).

I’m not sure how I feel about this whole situation. Haha. Him seeking her out was pretty adorable, but at the same time, it’s really frustrating. Violet seems to understand WHY he asked that of her instead of being jealous and irrational and completely blowing him off; it was refreshing. I love seeing Andrew vulnerable though. He definitely was at her mercy. And him not pointing out that he’s out of her league and all that… I don’t know. I think that says a lot about his character. I think it really shows how much he really cares for her and only makes it that more believable that he truly CAN’T decide (not that I didn’t believe it before). As much as she may be aware of the disparity between the two, I personally don’t see Andrew feeling like he is in any way above her or better than her as person or because of his social status. He’s just a guy who happens to like a girl (well, two girls – but that’s beside the point).

I’m curious to see how this plays out. She may not wait, but that doesn’t mean he won’t try to stick around until he makes his decision. Especially if he doesn’t want her to write him off. I look forward to more!

And I have to say that a part of me really would like to see her and Chris get together. It would certainly be an interesting pair. Hehe.

I just like this story so much. Please update soon this time. 3

Hello again! We just wanted to add that we don't ship Chris and Vi, because we don't see it. We see them more as friends rather than something romantic. Also,can we request a Chris story, a romance/humor, because we love Chris! 3

Finally you updated! YAY! The plot was once again unexpected, yet we loved it, because that's a good principle of a writer-good cliffhangers. To be honest, we believe that Andrew and Vi isn't meant for each other. Many might comment that this statement is bull, because they ship those two, but we have our reasons. If a man doubts his feelings for you because of another woman, then it was never meant to be. Although we must agree that it is completely understandable for Andrew to feel these conflicting feelings, but Vi deserves better. Vi should not have to wait for Andrew, because she spent her whole life waiting, and pleasing those she cares about. It's time for her to be selfish for once, even though it's out of her characters. But we do believe this is a good characterization for a dynamic character that most writers want to go for. But it is your story, so we are excited to see what you will do next.

And we have reached a stalemate

There really is a YA book out there called flipped (pic of a chick flipped upside down LOL)

i've been waiting so long for this chapter and it finally came, but it's a bit unsatisfying. i'm really glad that violet's making her own choices and standing up for herself though! i just wish there was a bit more resolution between her and andrew, but i guess i'll have to wait patiently for that

Oh my god. I am so in love with this story. I'm so I'm love with the characters. So In love with Violet and how she's finally standing up for herself. I adore Amdrew, but honestly, now I really don't mind if they end up together. If Chris is an option then I'd rather her with Chris. Andrew's feeling San too torn, and it seems like Chris would be straight with her, and she deserves that. That being said, after reading this chapter, if she ends up single and satisfied, I'm happy with that too. If she's happy, I'm happy.

I say move on violet

OMG I'm so proud of Vi for taking a stand against both Josephine and Andrew! WOW she has come so far since the beginning of this story! :)

I've waited foooooorrrreeeevvveerrrr, and the chapter was too short! But that doesn't mean it wasn't a meaningful one. I can't wait for your next update.

I love what we're seeing from from Violet right now and I can't wait to see where this will go. Please keep up the good work and update soon!