Reviews for Lunch atop a Skyscraper
Pseudonym59 chapter 22 . 2/8/2015
Go Violet! She's really coming into her own with not being so passive anymore. :)

I like how even though she was kicking Josephine out she was still nice and reasonable (since after all they ARE sisters, even though Josephine's a horrible sister). It's more realistic than how in a lot of other stories the main character will all of a sudden do a complete 180 with no explanation or gradual shift.

The part with Violet reading on the bench was so cute. :) I like seeing her passion for journalism and I think it's nice you're incorporating it more. I hope we get to see more of this side, her favorite stories/writers, her gripes with the system, etc.

I'm also glad Violet's more confident and assured around Andrew now. Before when she was just in awe of him and would trip over everything he said, while it IS how a lot of people are with crushes, it wouldn't have put them on an equal footing, which is something really important in relationships.

Can't wait to read more. :)
GoNe RoGuE chapter 22 . 2/8/2015
Ugh! I can't wait with all this suspense! What in the world is going on with them! They agree not to talk, it seems Andrew chose Abigail, but now he can't let Violet walk out of his life..? I'm very confused and hope next chapter alleviates some of my confusion. And why in the world did Violet want Josephine out of her apartment? What changed?
skye real chapter 22 . 2/8/2015
Good on ya, Violet. Way to get him to grovel But hey I gotta give it to him at least he made a small effort to run after her. Thanks for the update! Looking forward to the next one
Nicole Emerson chapter 22 . 2/8/2015
Please write more soon! I love this so much! Ok, Andrew is being so... Frustrating! I can't believe he is doing this to her? I mean what does he expect? Sorry! Haha I love it and please update soon!
LetMeWonder chapter 22 . 2/8/2015
This is so painful! Freaking Andrew. The horrible part is, that I kinda understand where he's coming from...though I totally empathize with Violet. :/
carrothead101 chapter 22 . 2/8/2015
DO YOU KNOW HOW MANY TIMES I CHECKED THIS STORY TODAY - LETS NOT EVEN TALK ABOUT THIS WEEK - AND I WAS ABOUT TO GO TO BED AND BAM HERE IT IS MY PRAYERS HAVE BEEN ANSWERED! I'm so happy and PROUD violet is so confident and just isn't taking any shit from anyone compared to before UGH I LOVE IT SO MUCH
darkXxXflames chapter 22 . 2/8/2015
My Heart ! If feels like it's gonna burst out of my chest!
Guest chapter 22 . 2/8/2015
Thanks for updating! Your stories are the only ones I've been following on this site.
Kay chapter 22 . 2/8/2015
Thank you so much for updating.
I could feel a change in Violet.
The meeting was unexpected but her answer wasn't.
Update soon! :)
AlwaysBeAUnicorn chapter 22 . 2/8/2015
I love it. She is finally standing up for herself and I absolutely love that. I, of course hope he comes back to her and that he picks her, but I am glad that she is not waiting and she will be okay if he doesn't. My favourite thing about this chapter is her standing up to her sister, I've been waiting for that since you introduced her to the story.
Guest chapter 22 . 2/8/2015
Its awesome the way Violet has grown and become a more confident person through the story. At this point she seems to be the strongest character. Early on Violet seemed to be in awe with Andrew which made Abigail more suitable for Andrew but now she has her life put together. Nice update!
Mesweetescape chapter 22 . 2/8/2015
Why do you ruin my life! Update soon please! This is emotionally killing me !
Guest chapter 22 . 2/8/2015
Nice! Hahaha. I had hoped they wouldn't talk for a long time. Like, this chapter won't feature Andrew. But oh, well. It's good that Vi's standing up for herself. Andrew is such a jerk. Making her wait, as if she'd be there forever. He should know how hard it is.

And I think Chris will be in the picture. That will certainly be an interesting addition to the story.

I really, really hope you update soon! I waited for months - not that I am complaining. I'm sure you have something up your sleeve.
Krimson chapter 22 . 2/7/2015
Nuuuuuuu I want them together! Why Author whyyyy?!
Jynx4Ever chapter 21 . 1/31/2015
Amazing.
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