Even though your setup is pretty typical of a story like this (unavailable hot boss, entry-level girl who could never be his type... etc) I really like what you've done here so far. Your characters are well thought out and Violet is a relatable and engaging protagonist. I look forward to more!

She is definitely going to give him a run for his money, even if she does find him attractive. She is too honest and outspoken to swoon and become a "yes-"woman.

I love Andrew now

Moarrr

:))

So happy you've updated! Can't wait to read the next chapter.. I think I love Andrew

I GOT SO ANGRY WHEN THIS ENDED YOU ARE TOO GOOD... I don't understand Andrew yet he is so unpredictable I love it

I love the plot! It's fun, fast-pace and the attraction is electrifying! Yummy combo. She's such a fish out of the water and he's so dark and brooding, quite the opposite to what Paul was referring to 'friends with benefits...without the friends part'... No doubt, he's a hot guy but he seriously needs a ray of sunlight into his life. She just may be it. Looking forward to see how the story develops.

So, I'm not even going to try and recreate the ungodly sound I made when I got that email telling me you updated. It's perfect because my last exam for the year was today (I live in NZ) and what a great way to end the year!

I really enjoy your characters. You do such a good job of allowing them to become real people and not encumbered by stereotypes or cliches. I warmed up to Paul even more this chapter if that was possible, and it goes without saying that I adore Vi. Plucky female protagonists are so much fun!

Thank you for the new chapter. I will now go back to checking my email every hour for another update. You do great work here and you bring me a lot of joy.

Good luck!

Very intrigued. Can't wait to read more. Update soon!

More,please

So good. So funny. So "full of feelings". Well written. I nearly missed it because I am a fan of supernatural stories and I started to read this one out of despair because for several days I haven't found a good one. Now, I despair because there is no more and I can't wait to read more.

Oooh I like this already! :D

Ok I really hope that is Abigail if not what happened to her and why is there a folder with her name on it. I cant wait to find out the story about what happened!

Andrew's girlfriend, assuming that's who she is, didn't seem terribly upset when she thought that Violet was there because she was "...really good in bed."

He seems to be playing fisherman right now. He seems to be playing Violet carefully. Hopefully she'll be wise to him despite her own rebellious physical reactions. She doesn't seem like the office-fling type.