Reviews for Lunch atop a Skyscraper
Guest chapter 25 . 8/24/2015
Yeah...i now know who the heroine is supposed to resemble...did u do a mirror image of that girl from twilight...that one who doesn't have anything to!...she seems sooooo slow...hmmmmm...feels like she needs something...I know...a brain transplant!...yay! if you could just weave that into the story...there may be hope for her yet...
Guest chapter 25 . 8/24/2015
Ohmigosh! Two updates in one day?! *happy dance* You made my Monday morning SO much better! Thank you!

Holy cow! I don't even know what to say! My mind is spinning like Violet's! What Abigail said though sort of caused a change of heart in me regarding Andrew. Like he finally chose. But he's being such a blockhead about all of it! UGH!

Honestly, I still don't know how I feel about Abigail. She's still a wildcard for me. She seems like she's a nice person. She doesn't seem mean or manipulative. But she seems very...flighty. And nosy. With me being a super personal person, I guess I find her nosiness bothersome. Or maybe it just seems nosy to me. And perhaps I am a bit biased because I really like Vi. It's kind of sad, because I feel like Abigail and Violet would be good friends. I mean, if they both felt they had nothing against the other, I think that speaks something about the both of them. I'm curious about how you, as the author, want your readers to feel about Abigail. And I wonder if she and Vi do become friends, how that would affect anything with Andrew.

Also, I love Marina. I think she's an awesome friend to Violet, taking her call so late at night and willing to lend an ear without question.

Oh, man! I am so excited to find out what happens next! Please update when you can (hopefully soon!)!

Many hugs and kisses for making my morning start off happily (I am SO not a morning person)! :)
C chapter 25 . 8/24/2015
Isn't violet always hearing good things about Andrew from other people? He seems like a slacker and I don't like the recurring theme of other people having to convince violet that he's worth it. He's not a good guy for the way he's treated Violet, like how he disappeared and went silent toward her when Abigail reappeared. It's not fair or considerate and it just makes it seem like he only thinks about himself, like he doesn't talk to Vi because HE'S feeling all mixed up, forget about how she might be feeling.

So I don't know. I don't think Violet should give him a chance after what Abigail told her in this chapter. I think Vi should keep the no contact with him and let him come to her if he really wants to. Because the Andrew we've seen so far is not a decent partner in a relationship, and he needs to show a serious desire to change how he's been acting.

Sorry for the criticism, he just seems to be having less and less appealing qualities. Even if he did come see Violet I don't think she should just take him back. Idk maybe the only thing that I'd "allow" is if they started from scratch, or if they parted ways and reunited a few years down the line. But that's already been a plot line with Andrew and Abigail, so idk.
xxSongBirdxx chapter 25 . 8/24/2015
Wow was not expecting that, so what is Andrew's deal why did he not tell her this?. Do I think its wise for her to befriend his ex maybe not, that is going to be awkward. I'm really looking forward to his reasons why in the next chapter though. whenever that will be, until then see you next update.
AngelsXDevils chapter 25 . 8/24/2015
It's actually kind of pathetic how excited I get when I see you've updated haha
But aargh if we could please just get Violet and Andrew together that would be great thanks! :P
xxSongBirdxx chapter 24 . 8/24/2015
Finally got to reading this chatper because of the new update, I really dislike her Parents they sound like small minded judgemental prats, Why can't they just be happy for Violet?. Andrew was a little cowardly not saying anything though maybe Vi wouldn't have appreciated it if he did. I hope this trip some how brings them closer. What I hope to find out in the next chapter? that is the situation with Abigail?
Kay chapter 25 . 8/24/2015
Thank you so much for updating this wonderful story.
It was great. So unexpected. So frustrated in the end too. Why, Andrew? Why?
Zettaiyo chapter 25 . 8/24/2015
OMG! Loved the update. I had just re-read this story today as well. I can't believe Andrew didn't tell her. So excited to see what happens next. Thanks for both the updates today. You made my day
Clawstrike590 chapter 24 . 8/14/2015
Waaahhh! I stayed up all night to get to the end, only to find that it's not done yet! Please update soon!
toffeema chapter 24 . 8/9/2015
Hi! Maybe an update before school starts up again?!
Guest chapter 9 . 8/2/2015
agh Before Sunrise CANNOT BE RIGHT AHHH
Guest chapter 24 . 7/31/2015
Please please update soon...
Daliah Valley chapter 24 . 7/26/2015
Do I have any interest? OF COURSE I HAVE INTEREST. I stayed up until 5 in the morning reading this story! I'm so frustrated with these two obstinate knuckleheads that I want to scream and cry and punch them. Please, please update soon. I NEED THIS STORY. PLEASE DONT HOLD OUT ON ME. I'm begging you. BEGGING. I adore this story. I love the characters, love to hate other characters, and love each chapter I read. Please update soon! Please!
Ana chapter 24 . 7/24/2015
What happen please continue your story i just love your story i can't wait for the next chapter please continue
RemindMeOnceAgain chapter 24 . 7/16/2015
This is amazing. I love your writing and how you've incorporated so many different characters' stories together! Can't stop reading all you've written :)) Please update soon :D
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