Reviews for The World Will Keep Turning
Command and Capture chapter 1 . 10/18/2013
I know you probably wouldn't expect a review all so sudden: but I was bored and I'm checking the recent posts to see what other people got :)

This story (I don't know what to call it) is certainly deep, a great vivid description. My favorite character was the rock, how it represented depression. Here's the thing, rumors don't hell make what you are, you are what you think you are. If you think you're a shy kid, you'll be a shy kid. You think you're an El Macho, then you'll be an El Macho. The Earth will keep spinning, so make sure your mind can keep up with it.

Hang in there :)