|Reviews for Captain Steven Taylor|
| Order and Chaos - Qui Iudicant chapter 1 . 10/19/2013
This is perhaps the most "real" of stories I have ever read on FP. I can literally imagine this happening just as it is written. It seems so ordinary; yet it strikes an inner tone inside of me. I felt as if I was Private Jones in this story; that was how real it was.
Aside from that, it was sound, structurally speaking, no misspellings that I can see, and nothing wrong with the tone whatsoever.
All in all, I'm proud to have this on my favorite's list. Great work.