Okay, it's official. Monica is nothing like my best friend, but I've fallen in love with Alex.
Please don't make him gay.
... On second thought, make him gay for Max! I can see it now, and I'm in heaven! xD

I can officially say I not only love your story, but your writing style. :D I've been following this story since chapter 1 (Woo! Three whole days! Great posting time, by the way. :P ) and loving every second of it.
I also love how you use the word wanker, as I don't see it in many stories.
Other than that, I love the characters (and how you've made them realistic) and how you've introduced them. I'm really interested in seeing how this goes! :D