Reviews for What She Doesn't Know |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I really liked this chapter, I was hoping it would come soon considering I enjoyed the others so much. Have you considered making your chapters a little longer? I feel like I just didn't get enough and I was so hoping to . I really liked the references about her kind, and I like the term "Watcher". Though I still can't figure out what she may be, thought we can guess she is affected by silver, I can't wait to find out. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The moment you mentioned the blonde-haired guy, I was like, "COME ON SAVE HER ALREADY SO I CAN FALL IN LOVE WITH YOU." I mean, don't we always somehow fall in love with the guys saving damsels in distress? And in turn, don't our heroines fall in love with them? I enjoyed reading this. I went through all three chapters in one sitting. What I would suggest is elongating your chapters a bit and not having so many breaks. If anything, try to find some way to gradually blend one part with another. Good job though :) I especially love her name. The fact that it's a masculine name automatically makes your character a memorable one. Feel free to check out my story. I'd love for you to give me some advice. Thanks, Carla |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi! I love your story so far, and I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep on writing :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() You cannot just end a chapter like this, my friend. YOU B NEEDIN' TO CONTINUE! I'm so prepared for this story I can't even... |