Reviews for What She Doesn't Know
carlalegre chapter 4 . 11/3/2013
I really liked this chapter, I was hoping it would come soon considering I enjoyed the others so much.
Have you considered making your chapters a little longer? I feel like I just didn't get enough and I was so hoping to .
I really liked the references about her kind, and I like the term "Watcher". Though I still can't figure out what she may be, thought we can guess she is affected by silver, I can't wait to find out.
carlalegre chapter 3 . 11/1/2013
The moment you mentioned the blonde-haired guy, I was like, "COME ON SAVE HER ALREADY SO I CAN FALL IN LOVE WITH YOU." I mean, don't we always somehow fall in love with the guys saving damsels in distress? And in turn, don't our heroines fall in love with them? I enjoyed reading this. I went through all three chapters in one sitting. What I would suggest is elongating your chapters a bit and not having so many breaks. If anything, try to find some way to gradually blend one part with another.

Good job though :) I especially love her name. The fact that it's a masculine name automatically makes your character a memorable one.

Feel free to check out my story. I'd love for you to give me some advice.

Thanks,
Carla
aryaausten chapter 2 . 10/25/2013
Hi! I love your story so far, and I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep on writing :-)
heytheredemonsit'smeyagirl chapter 1 . 10/23/2013
You cannot just end a chapter like this, my friend. YOU B NEEDIN' TO CONTINUE! I'm so prepared for this story I can't even...