This was such a great story, It was not just entertaining but adventurous, exciting, mysterious and romantic and had the best transition into Meri and Haemon's story I have ever read. Also you two are absolutely fabulous writers doing this together. I still am unable to detect any variation from one writer to the other. So congratulations you two, you have written a first rate story which I am sure to re-read again and again. - Shelley

Looking forward to finish reading this one and can't wait for Haemon and Meri. - Shelley

As a reader I am unable to distinguish between you two. It reads seamlessly which in my opinion demonstrates just what amazing writers you both are and why I've chosen both your stories to read. So on to the next chapter. Shelley

It is so fast paced that all I will say is great job you two and now I'm off to the next chapter. See ya, Shelley

In your authors note, you have just reiterated all my questions. I'll find out the answers in the future chapters. - Shelley

I'm loving this story and it's only the beginning of this adventure. It's also amazing how two different writers can be so in sync with each other to create this amazing story. Thanks for doing it. - Shelley

Well I'm hooked. This is exciting. I think I'm going to enjoy this story very much. - Shelley

Ah yea! Thanks for the update. I love the dragon! How he was so quick to fight him because he laid his hands on a women. Please update soon!

i love this story

A long chapter this may have been but, was it thoroughly edited? I think not. I spotted many mistakes that impeded my understanding. Please fix them. The action part was really confusing. You wrote the body split into two and then, what happened? I didn't understand. The ground opened up and then what happened? I still didn't understand. She went up to hell, talked to Thanatos and then, what happened? How come she was suddenly mirroring Haemon's actions. What happened? I am confused.

This chapter was definitely more enjoyable than the past few you have written. Thank uou for posting this. J look forward to reading more soon.

Woo! Finally, a kiss! :D I feel sorry for Alastor and Angie...they're both such a handful. XD

Thanks for the update!

It was an enjoyable chapter. There were many times I wanted to smack Angie's face. Thank God that bitch died. Haemon and Meri? ;)

about time. bet he does the "it shouldn't have happened" speach. blah.