Reviews for Delicate Hearts
The Golden Orchid chapter 25 . 8/6/2016
Your wonderfully written story just saved me from a cold and lonely night
LoveIs4EverCrazy chapter 25 . 6/4/2015
Please write a sequel? Please I absoutly love this story, this is literally the 4th time I've read it. Lucas is such a sweet heart even though he try's to hide it and jasmine can be a little bitchy but I still love her.

If you do one day write a sequel could you make more Lucy and Nathan chapters? Even though he cheated I still think his adorable and Lucy should really give him another chance his only human.
LoveIs4EverCrazy chapter 1 . 5/15/2015
This story is so amazing, I have already read it 3 times now eagerly waiting for the sequal! I really hope you do continue with this story. Lucas and Jasmine are absoutly perfect for each other, I do hope you make a little more Nathan and Lucy chapters that would amazing
Roses are Red chapter 24 . 5/1/2015
Please, please, please make a sequal! I am absoutly in love with this story it would me the world to me if you made a sequal.

Perhaps maybe about Lucas and Jasmines wedding? Or they have a baby? Please consider it
Eb chapter 25 . 12/27/2014
OMG! I have read so much fanfiction but this one is by far the best I have ever read. I really think you should make a sequal? It would be so amazing if you did. I would love it
HayleyDreamsFoever chapter 25 . 5/26/2014
Love this
Guest chapter 26 . 5/16/2014
When are you going to write the next story?
Darth Ultor chapter 26 . 4/22/2014
Pretty good ending. I'll certainly be reading the sequel. Uh, may I ask that you give a look to a little more of my fic?
Abbey chapter 25 . 4/22/2014
Glad it ended on a happy note
Lily Mayflower chapter 24 . 4/17/2014
It was a great write ... but you completely changed your characters and the change was not gradual, it was abrupt and total. Lucas went from a hot rich bad-boy to a sap without spunk and Jasmine ended up the stereotype for weak women, always crying and always assuming they know what the guy feels and thinks ... I don't get it! And I don't see an improvement, especially because someone that goes through so many hard times as both of them comes out stronger and more determined in the end, not weaker and more delusional. You can't tell me the guy that did his best to ruin his life every day at a time and the girl angry at life for taking everyone from her would believe in this pretend total love and adoration. Realistically, they would love eachother and take every day and make the best they could. The only character that retained any kind of realism is Gabriella, but even she acts more like an insane grandmother than a mother of boys with a teenager in the house...

Never meant any offence, and I truly want you to see this as constructive criticism. Because it is.
Darth Ultor chapter 24 . 4/17/2014
Well it's been quite a ride. I certainly hope you'll expand on this. Possibly a story about Nate and Lucy. XD
Darth Ultor chapter 23 . 4/15/2014
I'd love to see Nate and Lucy's story.
Jax chapter 23 . 4/8/2014
Hi, just read your whole story tonight (well, it's night here), it's really good :) I have to be honest, I clicked on the story a couple other times and just couldn't get myself into the first chapter. I don't have any specific advice for it though, maybe it was my mood and not actually something that needs to be corrected, it just felt too dense to catch my attention. Anyway, I'm glad I finally made myself start it )
Lily Mayflower chapter 23 . 4/8/2014
This was emotional ... loved it. Why not keep this story going for another few chapters and wrap Natan and Lucy's love story too ... maybe a double wedding ...
gabbia97 chapter 23 . 4/8/2014
I would definitely read Nathan and Lucy's story
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