Really lovely poem! Keep up the good work and I really hope to read more poems or even short stories from you!

Lovely poem, though you might want to edit it a bit. It's really close to The Tiger by William Blake, and I'd hate for such a great poem to get taken down for plagiarism.

I don't usually read poetry, but I was browsing through the new works released and this caught my eye. Sadly, I can't give constructive criticism since I can't judge much on poetry at all.

I liked reading it though :)
You should write more :D

-Shanny