Reviews for Closets and Flames
ETK chapter 1 . 10/28/2013
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Interesting poem. The premise was very interesting, and the extended metaphor of the closets and moths was definitely intriguing from the beginning, and rightly emphasised through the piece. Rhyming was very natural, metre was kept for the most part, expression of emotion was very well used.

Vocabulary sometimes was a bit misplaced: "align" could have been something a bit more delicate, perhaps "rest". "A flame of cases comes burning bright" could be replaced by something that carries the intensity a bit more, perhaps "Flaming hoards blaze, with burning bite", or something to that effect.

Good though.