Pls updateTT_TT

L-lewd...! Also RIP this story

Continue please!

Finish the next chapter please!

Thank you for the mention :]
I enjoyed this. The scene was good but the writing can be improved. You made a few errors with grammar. Fix them :)
I look forward to the next chapter!

It is not fast. I think she is being rash. But, it is making the story move so I can't complain. Update soon!

At first glance, this chapter doesn't seem necessary at all. But after sitting back and thinking about what I read, I realised that this chapter informed me of the dynamics of the current relationship between Chika and her boss. However, as interesting as it was, I wasn't really connected to it. Maybe it was because I couldn't wait to get to the part where Chika and her boss would be slobbering over each other :p
This chapter can be more entertaining. You can also work on your presentation of dialogue. Sometimes I don't know who is saying what. These are some things you can work on. I hope my review helps :)

oooooohhhh... I can't wait for the next chapter! This is so interesting.

I wanted to know more about her boss [/] . I mean he was somewhat interesting. I really like plots like this: love-hate (somewhat) relationships. or subordinate-boss relationships

hoping for the next chapter

I cannot wait to read the next chapter! :D If I am not wrong, boss does not equal to supervisor. Check that out :) What is "kami-sama"? This chapter was amusing.

The plot is interesting. The hook was when you said she wanted to be g-ed (I don't want to give away spoilers). The line was when you described what happened with her ex. The sinker was at the almost-end of this chapter when the mysterious man uttered her name. Her idea was crazy from the get-go but you reeled me in. Good job. I spotted a few grammatical errors but I am only going to surface some. I hope you don't mind.
1. The first sentence: You wrote, "I was never been..." If you want to use "been", you should replace "was" with "have". If you want to keep the "was", removed the "been". :)
2. "I'm secretly...someone [would] grope". You forgot the "would".
3. "throwing everything to the window" is what you wrote. Replace "to" with "out" and I believe your phrase would be right.
Thank you.

I loved it. :D Yeah, there were some mistakes but this is some of the best writing I've read. I'd love if this became a full-blown story!
And don't worry, it was great for your first lemon! :P

Hey, I read your story and yeah. It's somewhat twisted since the girl was asking to be groped in public. But it's somewhat okay for me. I am now curious to what will happen the next day.