Reviews for Candy Confessions
weirdnessunleashed chapter 1 . 7/7/2015
Could've been longer.
I've not thought that in a long time. This was good. And I think I want to read more.
Hecate'sHufflepuff chapter 1 . 1/11/2014
Very tasteful(get it? ) I absolutely love this story! Very humorus and I would love seeing more work like this. Keep writing!
zoe chapter 1 . 11/7/2013
i love this paly its so funny and cute ;) a group of my friends and i are even doing it for a short film/play in our grade 9/10 drama class :) love it! -zoe
Silverlining101 chapter 1 . 11/5/2013
This is brilliant! I love the conflictions and the lines are very clever :D
Do you mind if my drama group used the script for a school project?
Saya Deshca chapter 1 . 11/2/2013
Well, since you said i was a troll and that i couldn't make the same comments on your other stuff, here i am.
Just to show you im not a troll.
It already begins kinda efortless. You say four people are sitting in a circle...But you dont say where, you dont say how theyre dressed, you dont say what they are doing, the gestures, anything.
And then there are stuff like "they all silence and look at her". English is not my native language, Ill tell you, but i know that's horribly wrong.
I liked the dialogues tho.