|Reviews for Warning On The Castle Walls|
| speaknoevilsaynolies chapter 1 . 11/12/2013
you messed up this
Warning On The Castle Walls
By: karmadella1234 PM
This is a poem that just came to mind so read if you like appropriate for most everyone. Nothing graphic or such. Please try it out you wont regret it hopefully. :) AHA Now it is poems that have come to mind if you read and like review dont like review want me to write on a certain topic review do (you) see the common theme?
Rated: Fiction T - English - Fantasy/Supernatural - Chapters: 4 - Words: 602 - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 11-12-13 - Published: 11-01-13 -
| Inu No Taisho The Daiyokai Dog chapter 2 . 11/9/2013
Can I post the death sandwhich and caprain jack song?
| Inu No Taisho The Daiyokai Dog chapter 1 . 11/9/2013
Who knew you could write poetry My only advise is if you capitalize the first letter of each word it give emphases.
| Rogue Melody Angel chapter 1 . 11/7/2013
You were right! It was worth while to read it's really beautifully written! Great work!
| Ally-Ann chapter 1 . 11/2/2013
My word, you have such beautiful syntax. Some more punctuation such as commas and semi-colons would make it even stronger.