Reviews for Speak To Me |
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Guest chapter 25 . 1/30/2015 Love love love.. |
amerifreak chapter 26 . 8/17/2014 Oh my gosh I followed this story a long time ago but I never went on reading it. I've come back to fictionpress recently and I devoured your story in nearly a day! I love it so much you really know how to tug on emotions |
ryllie chapter 26 . 8/13/2014 hey, infinitelylydia! Wow - I think that needed to be the first word of this review. Speak to Me was a really powerful story. For sure, this story isn't perfect (I'm saying this out of respect, honestly): I think the way you introduced Zac and the way Addy dealt with Titus towards the end could have been better fleshed out. Gary perhaps could have been introduced earlier on in the story. But despite all of those things, you got me hooked! The characters' emotions were so well written, and I completely appreciate the start of every chapter. Addy's introspective thoughts pushed this story into something really special - and her thoughts (your words) really made me think about life, about being a person and about my own hopes and fears. Thanks for your inspiring words. - ryllie |
Echomist chapter 4 . 7/29/2014 Okay so I feel like I just found a hidden gem. This story so well written and I love it! That's all I want to say because I feel like that's what you deserve to hear/read. |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/23/2014 I really like your story, I like it enough to actually think about it and review ways you could make the story better. I hope u don't mind constructive criticism: Zac's character. I didn't really feel much for him, I think the reason behind this was because most of what I knew of his character was based on what addison TOLD us. I wouldn't have noticed his personality had two sides without her mentioning it. As my english teacher once told me: show it, don't say it. Maybe if we saw him interacting with other people, we could see different sides to him Her mom also is never there? Her brother's presence is there but her mom seems to be non-existent Addison spent half her life watching others, yet she doesn't really mention what is going on around her. In my opinion, the story is very much centred on her thoughts and herself- she doesn't describe what she sees, how others interact around her |
Guest chapter 25 . 4/23/2014 Haha.. I can't seem to feel sorry for gary. I think it's ridiculous that he even hoped for a shot after everything he did |
Guest chapter 22 . 4/22/2014 I like this reveal I think the previous chapter could have been executed better, I mean the part with the bully who caused her phobia.. I think what was missing was a reflection on her part, if I was her I would feel a sense of loss from the realisation that I suffered years due to this guy's words when his issue wasn't even with my voice but his own feelings of insecurity. A sense of anger too because he lived carried on as normal- living his life while f***ing mine up |
Guest chapter 5 . 4/21/2014 I really liked the advice that Daisy gave in the podcast.. '..the one who can capture his heart is the one that should be with him.' Really good advice |
Guest chapter 4 . 4/21/2014 Wait... Did u just mention Epik High? First Pokemon and now Epik High... You seem like an interesting person I really like the idea of your story btw. You hear about people having weight issues, dealing with anorexia, self image.. But a person's voice being their insecuirty.. I have never come across that |
Guest chapter 24 . 4/3/2014 your story is really inspiring, wow! it really it home! you have given me inspiration, thank you. continue the good work and if your not already, think about getting published. |
lirelover chapter 25 . 3/29/2014 OHHHHH! I LOVE IT SOOOOO MUCH! |
ab2heaven chapter 25 . 3/29/2014 this is awesome! loved it to no ends! |
Guest chapter 25 . 3/27/2014 One word to describe:Beautiful. Nothing else. |
R. Ficst chapter 25 . 3/27/2014 I definitely enjoyed the read. I think some places came across as insincere or overdone, but there were other sections that rang deep and true. I like your cast of characters, I think you filled them out nicely. This ending is nice, too. Although he only seems to half-see where he went wrong, the change of perspective and the final sentence in particular make for a great closing. Thanks for posting! |
A.E. Summers chapter 25 . 3/25/2014 Lol I loved it. It was cheesy but hey I think its great! |