Reviews for Boys Bantam: How I Found a Girl at my All-Boys Summer Camp |
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Joeson chapter 1 . 5/2/2021 I can't get enough of your book. The storytelling is just perfect. Why don't you tpublish your work on NovelStar? A lot of readers will surely love your book. |
Nemone chapter 1 . 6/12/2018 Oh wow I love this already. I was into the story before I knew it and I love the MC already. His mom seems like a total capital B. The other characters are also interesting and I love how their personalities and appearances are already forming in my head. |
Brooklyn chapter 4 . 10/2/2017 Update! Update! So so so fucking good! |
Queen.of.the.Ashes chapter 3 . 12/30/2016 Now that you have 500 reviews please tell me you will be inspired to write. I'm super curious about Nick 'troubles' and I'm guessing/hoping that Tad is the love interest because I ship it! |
Queen.of.the.Ashes chapter 4 . 12/30/2016 Please finish this. I know it's going to be amazing! |
Toto chapter 4 . 5/15/2016 nice hope it works out 4 u heart kenny linc |
FanofPrevDraft chapter 3 . 3/12/2016 So, judging by the summary and how this has been going so far, this isn't going to be a NickxKiwi, pairing? Or if it is, there isn't going to be that mind blowing plot twist? Well, I guess I'll just have to wait and see I guess... I have to wonder though, what made you rewrite the entire thing? |
Totes chapter 3 . 3/10/2016 *heart face* |
TotoDaDog chapter 3 . 2/27/2016 Nice chap sis |
SForces chapter 1 . 2/22/2016 The story starts out pretty interesting. One thing that I did notice is you described the minor characters in more detail than the main characters. If I were to close my eyes right now and try to visual Dan or Nicky all I would see is their gender. Yet I know a scratchy description of the bus driver, of Kenny and of Linc. They stick out like sore thumbs in your book yet Nicky and Dan or described nowhere. |
BunnyChoi chapter 1 . 2/21/2016 Hello! :) I'm returning your review! :D So far I enjoyed reading this story. Although I think this plot is very interesting, I feel like I need to read more to fully understand what's going on. I saw that it was up to 26 chapters, but now there is only one. xD Also, I noticed you posted chapter one twice. Didn't know if you were aware of that or not! From what I have seen so far, Nicky is a very complex character that has parents that just don't understand how to handle him. I want to get to know him more! I only really saw one error, just a minor one: "...seat toward me as I hopped out, I and slung it over my shoulder..." Take out the extra 'I'. :) Over all, very interesting and would love to read more! Take care and keep writing! ~BunnyChoi |
Totes chapter 1 . 2/20/2016 good job bob i like it |
will chapter 26 . 2/15/2016 In the wise words of Thor "Another!" |
Anonyreader chapter 26 . 2/12/2016 Welp, your story has me hooked. PLEASE continue the story. I'm really enjoying it and looking forward to the next chapter! |
Guest chapter 26 . 1/6/2016 Pls more |