|Reviews for Follow The Signs|
| alltheeagles chapter 1 . 11/11/2013
Short and sweet, and all in one tidy package, plotting-wise. I enjoyed the contrast between the 'trying to relax on a vacation' scenario and the science content, not all of which I understood, I confess.
The story raises questions, which to me is a characteristic of a good story - it leaves an impression on the reader, and is thus not forgettable.
There was one sentence I didn't get - 'And so on this lonely shore' up to 'could be be refuted' - I can't see the connection between the first part and the second part, unless you mean that what happened next could not refute the two possibilities. There were two 'be's in there, which might mean something got deleted in between?