|Reviews for The Hunt|
| Dracorex16 chapter 18 . 3/4
Nice chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next.
| 11037'sExecutioner chapter 18 . 3/4
Yay, an update! I liked this chapter, it was nice and fluffy but not in a bad way. This is pretty impressive as a lot of authors tend to make fluff rather tedious to go through but you did a great job making it enjoyable to read and interesting as we got to learn some backstory!
Also, I feel like you might be referencing West Side Story, but I'm not really sure because it's been a while since I last saw it.
| delovelies chapter 18 . 3/4
WEST SIDE STORY!
| 11037'sExecution chapter 17 . 3/2
Hey, Angry Guest. I'm not sure if you're reading this, but I really hope that you are.
I can tell that you're extremely mad about Ruby, Yin, Pyrrhus and Weiss so if you want to be mad at someone, be mad at me.
I'm the one who submitted them, I'm the one who made a mistake. If you want to berate someone, or be a jerk to them, come at me. Just leave Shades alone, it's not her fault. I'm the one who screwed up, I'm the one who'll take the blame. So please, if you want to attack someone, attack me. I've been attacked on the internet before, I can take it. Just please, leave Shades alone.
| omega1012 chapter 18 . 3/3
loved that chap cant wait til you get to emerald or whhatevers next :)
| AlphaChurch chapter 18 . 3/3
Aw, I wouldn't hate you! It was my fault, you had every right to be irritated with us and I understand your annoyance! If there's anyway for me to make this up to you, I'll be happy to do something.
Anyway, this chapter... I actually really liked it, even though it was a lot of fluff. It's nice to see some backstory for some of your characters, I loved it! I didn't catch any references, but I'm not really good at that. XD
| Leon 11037 chapter 17 . 2/28
Sorry this is a guest review, but I couldn't write a new one because I reviewed the author's note.
Anyway, I loved this chapter and the delay is fine, I've had much longer ones.
| Angry guest chapter 7 . 2/27
Dude r u really just ripping off rooster teeth not cool man not cool
| Angry guest chapter 6 . 2/27
Did u really think that u could get away with ripping off rwby what the heck man what the heck.
| AlphaChurch chapter 17 . 2/27
Thank you for the advertisement, I just need one more character before I can finish up my planning for the murders and stuff like that.
Anyway, I loved that little scene between Tex and Church, it was just adorable, and this was a great chapter!
Also, because some people reviewed for the author's note, they might not be able to review for this chapter, though they can review as a guest, just to let you know.
| omega1012 chapter 17 . 2/27
Interedting...cant wait to see what happens next!
| delovelies chapter 16 . 2/15
THank you! this is pretty cool! and the romantic fluff/angst is amazing!
| 11037'sExecutioner chapter 16 . 2/15
Awesome chapter! I liked that it was kind of fluffy, we can't have all action. And I hope you had a good Valentines Day or Singles Awareness Day, whatever you want to call it!
| 11037'sExecutioner chapter 17 . 2/15
I am so sorry, I just was trying to base these characters off of characters from those series, not steal from them in anyway. I have not seen hardly any of the series and I am truly sorry for this.
| I am writer chapter 16 . 2/14
I liked this chapter keep up the good work!
Oh and happy Valentine's day or single awareness day! Ether one you prefer. :D