|Reviews for breathe, live, free|
| carlalegre chapter 1 . 11/11/2013
I think it would be a great idea if you turned this into a story. With the small excerpt you provided, you have a lot of room to create a great piece of literature. You can manipulate this storyline into many different directions. If you do decide to to continue this, please PM me. I would love to read more and see where you take this.
Also, I'd appreciate it if you could read my story, After Life, and drop off a review. Thanks! And good job. The ending kind of broke my heart D: IN A GOOD WAY!