One word: brilliant.
I wonder how Loki will respond? And, how soon is Thor himself going to make an appearance, or is he going to be the distant kind of all-powerful dude?
-RoR

Whoa. Was not expecting that turn of events. So now they've got to find the quest, survive Loki's REAL dad but why the heck would he trust LOKI of all people?!
OK, I'm good. Done ranting. For now. :D
Great work! Update soon!

Daughter of Thor?! Wait, did you mention this before? Or am I just catching that?
I am thrilled, this is such an awesome follow-up chapter! MORE PLEASE!

You're a really good writer oh my god. This chapter was just as good-if not better-than the other ones. Nice job and I hope you enjoy writing the next parts, because I'm loving the reading part! Also, Aniki is awesome. The character development is well thought-out, though you're leaving me hanging a bit with Loki. Anyway, keep it up!
-RoR

Love the back and forth banter, really funny! :D
Great update, though I'm more curious now about Aniki than I was before. Nice touch!
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This chapter is just as good as the first; nice job! The way you've painted Loki is definitely interesting because normally he's the villain . . .
Anyway, I hope the next part comes quickly!
-RoR

Wow . . . I managed to catch this story really early. I'm writing a story involving Loki and Thor as well, but yours is much more focused on an older, more serious story, and I have to say that your writing is amazing. I'm already intrigued with the plot as well as Aniki, and I like that she's an independent and hotheaded kind of protagonist. I hope you enjoy writing this, because I'm already enjoying reading it.
Good luck,
-RoR

OK so this is totally awesome. You combined information from both the movie Thor and the legends! Brilliant! Can't wait for more!
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