|Reviews for Twin Flames|
| stuck in bed chapter 1 . 12/16/2013
Taking on both prompts? I could barely write one, so well done! You've got clear stamina :)
I enjoyed how we got two perspectives: Katherine and Jacob's. They both told their story, and it was lovely to see their romance grow. I especially love the last line: "I wanted to see where the crane went." Beautiful way to end it (although maybe, as he's going there, it would sound smoother as "...where the crane would go..."?)
I also love how you made Katherine use a cliche description and go: "I know that's not the best wording, but it's all I can think of. Besides, it's my story and I can do whatever I want." Sometimes I want to use that in my stories, haha!
Good luck with the challenge, with both this entry and the other! :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/12/2013
I felt so bad for Jacob!
| MileyRowling chapter 1 . 11/21/2013
Poor Jacob! I almost cried!
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/20/2013
The letter is well written, but it's so sad. I can just picture Jacob's pain! Great job on emotion!