Reviews for White Sound |
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![]() ![]() a few errors I noticed: He was pour, but he was happy. should be poor, not pour His first class wasn't actually until noon, but Josh couldn't cook to save his life, so he often chose to dine at Sarabeth's on Central Park South along with many other Parsons students. He could have went to the Starbucks right around the corner, but Sarabeth's was where his friend Tom always, believing it was better for picking up girls. I agreed, the girls that came into that place where stunners, but they were more my type than his. I liked girls who were smart and liked to talk about art as much as I did, and Tom was more into girls…and that's it. Pretty girls who came to New York with the hope of becoming Broadway actresses and fashion designers. That's not to say that those types of girls aren't smart, they're just not my type. what's with the sudden switch to first person? other than that this seems pretty good! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was such a quick ending! It was nice. I'm glad it ended though, because I was getting worries that the good times meant a fall was coming soon. Thanks for writing this story. I really liked it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh wow, intense chapter! I loved every moment! :D And that kiss was so cute ;) Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it so far. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww that was actually so adorable! :D I love Josh and Madison ahaha |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! Progress :D haha I am loving this! Update soon (: |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! Can't wait for the next chapter :D I love this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really interesting so far :D |