Reviews for The Father of My Children
jennymorgan0123 chapter 1 . 5/30/2014
My Name is Jenny Morgan,From United states. I wish to share my testimonies with the general
public about what this man called priestchidi has just done for me , this man has
just brought back my lost Ex husband to me with his great spell, I was married to
this man called Rolland we were together for a long time and we loved our self’s but
when I was unable to give him a child for 2 years he left me and told me he can’t
continue anymore then I was now looking for ways to get him back until a friend of
mine told me about this man and gave his contact email, then you won't believe this
when I contacted this man on my problems he prepared this spell cast and bring my
lost husband back, and after a month I stoped messtrating and went for a test and the result
stated am pregnant am happy today am a mother of a baby boy, thank you once again
the great priestchidi for what you have done for me,if you are out there passing through
any of this problems listed below:
1) If you want your ex back.
(2) if you always have bad dreams.
(3)And if you have issues with having a baby
visit his email .
dear-llama chapter 10 . 3/17/2014
Aaand the story about Max is out! Aw, I feel so sorry for him. Jack, too. I love how Jack really rises to the challenge of taking responsibility of his brother at such a young age. And I really like that he donated to the sperm bank for a reason other than it was a mistake he made in his youth (which usually tends to be the reason for stories with the sperm bank angle). I feel really bad for Sylvia too. Their sad pasts really makes me wish they'll finally be able to find happiness with each other.
dear-llama chapter 9 . 3/7/2014
Ooh, cliffhanger! This is making me really curious about Jack's reaction to Sylvia's mention of Max. I wonder what's going on...
dear-llama chapter 8 . 3/4/2014
Aww. That scene right at the end was so sweet. That memory of Sylvia's about Pete and Jim too. I'm really liking Jack now. Also, that quote he said, about the universe conspiring to make something happen... It totally reminded me of Paulo Coelho's The Alchemist. Was it a reference to that? Anyway, great chapter, the story's really coming along well! :)
zyx321 chapter 7 . 2/24/2014
A fun chapter. Look forward to seeing MAx
dear-llama chapter 7 . 2/23/2014
Aww. Loving how Jack is bonding with the kids and Sylvia. That was really cute :D
dear-llama chapter 6 . 2/13/2014
Oh gosh, I realised you changed your summary, I really love it! It sounds all mysterious and poetic XD this chapter was great, I love seeing jack and Sylvia's relationship slowly unfold... That conversation they had when they were alone was really interesting, it's great that we get to learn more about both of them. I do wonder what jack's statement was direct at though...? Did he have a past love? Ahh, update soon! :)
Veronica Fay chapter 6 . 2/13/2014
Going great so far! I'm really enjoying this
Guest chapter 6 . 2/12/2014
Hi! This is really good! I like the interactions between her and jack! It feels real
dear-llama chapter 5 . 2/4/2014
Aww, these scenes between Jack and Sylvia are so sweet! I feel all warm and fuzzy inside now. And you're really good at describing the landscape, the imagery is so vivid, it's almost like I'm there as well. Ah, lovely chapter. Great job, do update soon! :)
Guest chapter 5 . 2/4/2014
Too cute!
dear-llama chapter 4 . 1/30/2014
Aw, jack's a natural with those kids, isn't he? The scene of him telling the twins a bedtime story was just so sweet. I feel the budding romance between him and Sylvia, can't wait to see how it develops! (And ooh, the mention of Sam here is intriguing haha.) great job, keep writing!
zerocharisma chapter 3 . 1/30/2014
Author-sama your story has certainly undergone major changes,the light mood of the story has disappeared and the overall tone of the story is much darker and depressing- will you continue the whole story with the angsty tone? I know I said I liked the previous cheery and bubbly atmosphere of your story but I must admit I like the new version much yeah there goes my confession: angst and mystery are my stuff.
I remember telling you that I was hoping for something dramatic and twisted,it's like you answered my wishes- that makes me smile so much-I know I'm just assuming.
I've tons of questions but I guess they will be revealed in later chapters. Okieee-update soon!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/20/2014
Awww. Is this a rewrite? :(
Got me a teary! I know I'll love it just as much as the previous one :3
Rosewood Key chapter 3 . 1/16/2014
OMG! This is such a great story story! I love the plot and jacks character! Please update!
27 | Page 1 2 Next »