Day-um. I had hunch that you would come out with a story, but not a masterpiece like this! It describes what we call the Apocalypse in a whole different way. I can only guess and speculate, not predict at all.

Oh wow. This is really intense. What is it going to be rated M for?

This is breathtaking in its complexity and astounding in its ideas. The ideas and what seem to be modern values are called into question beautifully, without any awkward breaks in the musings of Garrett Lage. This story - even in the beginning - is by far one of the most developed and advanced works I have read on Fictionpress. The plot could go in many directions, but what catches my attention is the way that what defines sanity and the fundamentals of what keeps the masses in line are pulled out and examined like animals in a trap. Having read this, I greatly appreciate the effort put into it, and highly recommend reading this to anyone who happens to be looking at this review.
-RoR

This is highly integrating! It feels very... philosophical? I don't know if that's the right word to describe this, but it's what I was getting from this. Keep going with this; I'm curious to see where it goes from here.

Deep, thoughtful, and primal tone to all this. Like a thinking mind's manifesto to the universe.

I like this Garret Fellow thus far. I want to see him in action.

Yay! It's posted! I can't wait for the next chapter, it sounds like this is going to be one wild ride!
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