This chapter got my heart pumping for the next one! It is nice to see the brave commanders from Italy and Scotland introduced, including the famous Canede! Every sentence invokes a new vibrant image, good work!

You write well, and it depress me that this doesn't have more reviews. Though I can see why do to the history nature of the story, Biography is actually really useful but not amazingly popular.

Oh wonderful! A new chapter! Sorry about lack of corrispondance, I forgot my password :/( I am so excited to read the new chapter after I get some sleep

Forgive me for the non-review but I made an account and am AlTheHorseheadNebula. Keep up the good work and I will be reviewing under that name from now on. :)

Thank you so much. I might make an account soon. I really enjoyed this chapter. Joan's passionate faith and love rings true throughout . I enjoyed reading about her friendship with Charlotte, they are just like sisters! I look forward to the upcoming chapters. St Joan's life is throughly documented but there is nothing like reading a good story about her that stays true to her spirit.

I actually read it this time. The imagery isvery lovely and I love how you wrote St Joan. So charming is that sweet, brave, pious girl. And La Hire! It is always interesting to watch Joan convert his boisterous and foul mouthed ways! I can't wait to see how the battles are written and how the characters grow throughout the story.

I have not read much because it's late and my head is spinning from tiredness. However from what I have read I can tell you are a very good writer and I will continue to read more. I love St Joan too and the best thing is when you get fiction from someone who loves her and understands her. I am very excited to read more later.

You describe her very well in the end. I want you to have my appreciation :)

It was great! Congrat!

Nice!

Nice scene, I can imagine it as a movie!

I like the way your write and especially that you write as you were Jean de Metz.

I appreciate who writes about her. She was truely a great person and needs more attention.