Reviews for Charlie and Milo
Ravajava chapter 5 . 1/13
My biggest complaints would have to be that I'm on Chapter 5 and it took only three or so minutes to reach that point. Furthermore, nothing was achieved in that same period. By a quarter way through a story something should have hooked me in, some event that makes things interesting.

If not that, the world should at least be interesting to explore, but it's not. It's very much 'Another day in Hometown USA'.

Between the lack of an enticing story or a unique world... I'm sorry it's just not looking to hot.
StarryCat chapter 13 . 12/15/2013
I'm really enjoying this story, good job! :)
Azofel-Raz chapter 13 . 12/15/2013
well the story is very emotional for me
this is a good job with story
greetings from Mexico (y)
StarryCat chapter 4 . 12/4/2013
Cute chapter, good job :)
StarryCat chapter 2 . 12/2/2013
Good chapter! I love their relationship as cousins.
StarryCat chapter 1 . 12/2/2013
I like it so far! Seems like it's gonna be interesting :)