Reviews for The Amulets
Poo01 chapter 2 . 12/17/2013
Nice story, it'll progress nicely. Yeah. Totally.
AspiringWriter101 chapter 2 . 12/7/2013
You know, the story is kinda hard to follow, I don't know who's talking and also your characters are pretty over the top, unless this is humor or something, since it's funny.
AspiringWriter101 chapter 1 . 12/7/2013
Hey, this is a great start! So yeah, maybe you should get some grammar corrections. It's great you gotta a review Karebear! ;)
Rose Specktor chapter 2 . 12/5/2013
There were some grammar mistakes and confusing/awkward sentences. Interesting story, but a little confusing in my opinion. Good plot, though, and nice lettering in some of the sentences.