Reviews for The Warrior's Daughter
Guest chapter 1 . 8/7/2014
Just started reading this and seems good so far the only problem I've had is the beginning bit where you explain about Artemis' origins the mythology is a bit out Achilles was the son of a water nymph called thetis and a human king called Peleus if i remember right. He also had a son by a princess named deidamia called neoptolemus also called pyrhus because he had red hair don't mean to nit pick because the rest of what ive read seems pretty good.
EternallyMortal chapter 6 . 12/28/2013
Hey! So, I was reading one of Qwerty's stories and she suggested taking a look at yours. I think it's pretty good, especially for a first story. This last chapter's ending was a little confusing, though, when you suddenly shifted from her bedroom back to school again. I like your characters, and Alex is really sweet, but I think he's moving a little too fast. I really like, though, that you did Artemis the way you did. She's a decently well-rounded character, and you actually gave her flaws. :D Thumbs up for that! Although, she still hasn't solved the Aiden problem, but putting something like that off is realistic. Poor Abby, all freaked out. Anyway, all in all you have a great starter story going for you. I'm not going to pretend to be an expert on writing. I haven't written very much myself, so take my opinion how you like. What I'm trying to say is that this story isn't bad, but hasn't wowed me yet; just think about that. ;D

Guest chapter 6 . 12/27/2013
wow, ur a really good writer! the plotlines amazing, and u did really well with describing everything!PLEASE UPDATE!:D
loivissa17 chapter 1 . 12/6/2013
i want to know what happens to artemis.
it's an interesting story... :D and i like how you tell the story. keep it up :)

note:could you please not use profanity? :)