Reviews for The Chosen
LDF chapter 1 . 2/26
I'll be a bit blunt. It's not that the prologue is terrible, just that the concept is a bit full of holes. If the story has no idea why these new race of human exists, then the foundation is already pretty shaky. There also doesn't seem to be an explanation as to why these random superpower traits are beneficial or what they're originally used for.

I know my review's a bit late, but I just wanted to let you know that the concept needs work.
thriller101 chapter 2 . 12/30/2013
You should write more and tell us if mercy/murky gets chosen
DipperNewtRen chapter 2 . 12/29/2013
This seems really interesting! Continue!
waldoinred chapter 1 . 12/6/2013
Sounds interesting, a little like Graceling. I look forward to reading it )