|Reviews for The Diego Dancers(Stories)|
| Enigmatic Metamorphosis chapter 9 . 7/2/2014
I will be sincere: dedicating a whole story to a character guide (a very confusing one, at that) kind of, dunno, kills all the fun. I would've wanted to find out about their personalities by reading the actual story. Also, grammar, spelling and punctuation errors - lots of 'em. It's not to the point where it's unreadable but alas it still bothers me.
Other than that, I liked your characters, and I'm looking forward to see them in the story.
Ame to Yume
P.S: I hope you don't kind me saying, but this reminds me of Vocaloid, in a way.
| LDF chapter 1 . 6/30/2014
It's not good to start the story with the first chapter being a very confusing character list. You need to integrate this into the story.