Reviews for Sleep Tight
Daniel Kozaki chapter 2 . 3/6/2015
Ollo, Edgeh.
'"Ew."' - continuing Kicchan's undertones huh.
'Novels as holy books. Just what has this man been smoking?' - this.
Trust Miki to be excited amidst an earthquake.
'You can't just debate views and ideals when your subordinates are in the middle of a heated battle.' - finally, someone says it!
...
Dat chair.
Daniel Kozaki chapter 1 . 3/2/2015
Kicchan writing. As magical as always.
Dat fake British accent. Glorious.
Those titles. Dat nostalgia. :')
A musician too busy to read... almost made me tempted to point out Booms. X3
I want eleven hundred a month from reading books... -u-
'"… I may some motives..."' - [may have some]
'"I only play for the other team, if you catch my drift."' -w-
'"You'll think me potty. Hard and plastered, off my trolley!"' - this line reminds me of Elly.
'"He's a gay fake-British self-proclaimed god."' - sounds like a normal RAOSCal. X3
Manic-depressive, fun!
'"...residing in themind half of the universe."' - [the mind]
'"...and then we're trainedout of the mind half..."' - [trained out]
Srsly, someone need to make Ethan a god of RAOSCal tropes, like Mercutio and co.
'"I told you, I'd never take a fanny over a willy!"' - I must've spent too much time in the Asylum to understand this at first glance.
'"If we could join our inner universes..."' - ugh.

Smashing start. Do come back once a while, Kicchan, it's been four months already without a news.
Wanabii chapter 1 . 9/12/2014
If I had this as a regular paperback, I would have chucked it at the wall several time. Its amazing, but when it get's to an embarrassing part, I just can't read it.
Sentimental RainCloud chapter 2 . 5/30/2014
Mira's answer came with a tone of sarcasm. "Maybe a gay man with a fake foreign accent is connecting the DZ with other universes through the power of imagination."

LMFAO, this was a bloody brill chapter, Edge. If I do say so myself. Man, I was able to keep up with every character introduced much to my own surprise, but who's story does Deus belong to.
Sentimental RainCloud chapter 1 . 5/29/2014
Oh, brill. How blooming brill, I should say. Without a doubt you made an impressionable intro, if I do say so myself. Abso-bloody-luetly brilliant.

But, I have a few things I must address. Not only was this a good opening, I felt as if some things could have been improved upon. For instance, where Ethan made that funny face, I felt as if you could have described it. A bit of redundancy was caused when he said people would make a face like... and you wrote he just made a ridiculous face. That to me fell short.

On a side note, I finally understood why there was such a dump of characters. It's like a universe creating from stories all piled up. So, yeah. I get it now. quq But I myself haven't read all those stories. Bloody hell.

I like the characters you introduced a lot. I feel as if I'd have a lot of fun writing about Ethan. Oh, he's such a bloody brill wanker.

Thanks for the good read.
cmaej chapter 10 . 3/11/2014
I kind of disappointed that Marie was the highest priority. I didn't expect Toru and Mela to be captured so soon. Do we have another crossover pairing? *w*

Huh... with Baz "dead", does that mean there's no need for Cujo to abduct Eli?

The good guys still seem like the underdog. I wonder what Eli's upgrade will be.
cmaej chapter 5 . 2/19/2014
Alright, I will try to say something that I didn't mention in the forums.

Kana's characters was 95% spot-on; even with her tears of rejection. Loved it.

Ryuji X Lis OTP - they both have the attitude to boot. *shoots Eli in the head*
And there ends the third wheel. *w*
Katsurou Shimizu chapter 7 . 2/5/2014
That was bloody smashing. Troll Roll approves *w*

Scorecard:

Literary references to Lewis Carroll's nonsensical poem in a mangaesque pingpongpiang story - 3 pts
Flower Rabu Rabu - 8 pts
British lingo back in full glory (Blimey hell) - 3 pts
Cannibalism undertones that will make Thundy proud - 2 pts
Body possession potential - 3 pts
Lesbian trolling sister - 2 pts
Absence of ping pong piang - 48 pts

Total score: 69/20

You outdone yourself. Keep it up and may the future writers continue the proud trolling tradition. *w*
Argentum Vir chapter 7 . 2/5/2014
By Jean, what have we done? Something tells me, this dream world is about to get even more complicated. This... is ridiculous. Since Deus is going to be a key villain, I must read FTTS. How in the hell did you come up the the mind control thing? And why did you not add Silver and company to it? They do this kind of shit all the time lol.
Razorine chapter 6 . 1/19/2014
The change in pace here is amazing. Things have a more relaxed feel, and the chaos is reduced ever so slightly. And Marie got some spotlight after all!

I don't you butchered any of the characters, Vir. It all seemed legit to me x3

That fight scene with Naomi and Rain was awesome. And the idea of villains gathering around a table was ominously good, too. And 'Extraordinary Gentlemen Club'... why do I have a feeling that this isn't villainy? xD

Whenever Deus is mentioned, you have to mention tea. It's practically a law *thumbs up*

Silver and the others will have a useful role in the story, methinks. And Marie's sudden power can practically make her as OP as the others ;D
TheFreeEdge chapter 5 . 1/18/2014
I think this chapter was much more down to Earth than the previous ones. It kinda held back on the insanity and tried to push the plot threads forward.

The only thing to complain about is Marie's role in this giant scheme is slowly disappearing. Someone needs to give her relevance soon.

By the way, Rinyaka and Deus OTP.
Razorine chapter 4 . 1/7/2014
Wow, that was an intense battle. I like how Baz was cool and collected while Mark was trying to annihilate him. And Zint was just watching in the background. xD

I see that Deus and Baz, AKA the Villains, might start an alliance. It'll be interesting to see how this goes, especially if written by other authors ;3

Hopefully Dan can bring out more madness... and dark twists *plays ominous note*

Anyways, good job Micah! I laughed at Joel's scene, though I am worried about his crazy sofa-symptom... *sweat drop*
cmaej chapter 4 . 1/7/2014
Now I feel bad for Tristan. And what the hell is going on with Joel? *cough* Drew Peterson.. *cough*

I think I know where this is going. The protags need to get it together before the bad guys form the League of Doom.
DevilPogoStick chapter 1 . 1/3/2014
...LOL

This is...Wow, this is indeed what you guys call a masterpiece XD

I really like the premise and how thins are going to occur for Marie as she will as Ethan says "Come and Dream!" :) Can't wait to see how it will go further! :)

I'm kind of tired but damn, I am so following this. XD

Keep it up guys!
Guest chapter 3 . 12/28/2013
I have no idea what to say anymore. This is like a Warriors Orochi crack mashup in fiction form.

Yabai when it comes to my turn.

*Ponders universe explosion to settle the conundrum*
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