Reviews for chalk and asphalt dreams
idairma chapter 1 . 1/21/2014
/stab Okay so I really like the formatting here with the "when you were [x]" and how it quite naturally develops from happychildhood to teenageangst (yay?)
I think you depict friendship pretty well here - because they used to be so close and now they're not but it's not like they directly hate each other or had some big dramatic fight, it just progressed (regressed?) in that way, and that's how friendships usually break down
;-; I really liked this poem overall, good job
writing-to-fill-the-emptiness chapter 1 . 12/27/2013
so emotional. illustrates the passage of time well, too. bravo! :)

much love

-c-
nevermores chapter 1 . 12/14/2013
Oh, this was sad but really beautiful and I'm almost in tears. :)