Reviews for Muddied Eyes
MethodlessMadness chapter 1 . 1/6
Yup. You said it. We're screwed.
Liked the rhyme :)
HighOnBrokenWings chapter 1 . 12/14/2013
I'm generally not a fan of rhyme as it can often come of as naff, but I feel as if you used it well for your purpose in this piece. Society is corrupt, isn't it? I really like that last stanza, it rounds the whole piece off well :)