Reviews for From Venice With Love
Julietish chapter 1 . 12/29/2013
Hey, it’s Juliet! Star-Cross’d entries always get a review from me, so here is yours. Your one-shot was good! I noticed that the words ‘flirtatious’ and ‘sexy’ were repeated twice within close proximity of one another, so you might consider finding synonyms for them. The title of the one-shot is very sweet and encompassed the tone of their encounter. I really loved the lines “Don’t go. I think I’m falling in love with you.” The narration was well-written, and I commend you for it.
darcydevenus chapter 1 . 12/18/2013
Well my lady, it's very cute, and if he's your romeo, I'm so glad that he didn't die. Still, I thought that this was quite good. Cherrio for that and thanks! I have to laugh about the bubble head twins. They seemed like normal 17 year olds. 아 자! 아자!
stuck in bed chapter 1 . 12/16/2013
I love strangers meeting up. So romantic. I didn't even realize you hadn't told me their names, which shows how magnetic you story was. And the ending: "I never left" is lovely, so absolute, so perfect.

One thing I noticed: "And I fell a willing a pray." I think you mean "prey".

Other than that, good luck! :)