As a transman, this story made me uncomfortable. I’d do anything to be born a real boy and can’t imagine the situation reversed. Good job capturing the emotions though.

This is really good. I'm sorry it took me so long to get to it.

What has he done indeed... xD

Aha... Ok, my lame and not-even-remotely-funny joke aside, this story... It kind-of hit me hard. It's all very well written, and...

Gee, now I feel a bit awkward... Aha... *cough* I can't help but think Jonah kissing the main character's abdomen had a bit of meaning behind it. I don't know, it's a bit of a guess. But, yeah, this story was... Wow... I can't really think of the right word to describe it...

All in all, this was really good. Really great job...

This was very strange but somehow fascinating. I usually hate characters with a poor body image because they seem so shallow, but your protagonist is interesting. If he thinks a penis looks strange . . . well . . . thanks for this little oddity, I hope you can write more like it :)