Ryder had flings with other girls..Stop..stop I stopped reading this story there itself. Didn't expect him to be that kind of character. It is a shock which I can't take. thanks.

Fantastic story. I enjoyed the ride. Thanks for sharing it.

I liked the story but I didn't like how you wrote Elyse's mom. I don't like people writing about bad parent-child relationships coz it puts parent-child relationships in a bad light. U might have some issues with your parents but deep down they do care. They might not be good at showing it and you disregarding them is hurting them as much as it's hurting you. My parents and I were in a similar predicament but we worked it out. Maybe you could as well.

OMG! I loved this story! it was so amazing, You should write a sequal! that would be the best!

Loved it!

Nice :) Well done. I was actually debating whether to read the epilogue since they are always so cheesy, but I gave in and caught up in all the mushy stuff ;)
I did feel like the last few chapters were a bit rushed and thoroughly predictable though, but it still made a nice story. Thanks

Loved this story! Can't wait for another! 3

This was obsolutely perfect! Well there were some things I would have added but looking beyond that it was great. I LOVED the beginning. I LOVE the middle. Oh, and I LOVED the end. Whatever you do don't write another about their relationship! Please because its perfect the way it is :) but you should really think about writing a story for Elyses best friend and her boyfriend and make it in both of their point of views. I'm sorry I already forgot the guys name.

Oh my gaawwssh I loveeed it. Write more ...write another awesome storryy...KEEP WRITING OR I WILL HIT U WITH MY INVISIBLE POM POMS.

Asdfghjkl this was so good. I loved it. I looked forward to each new chapter. That would seem obvious, but that's how I know the really good stories-I actually wait for them, and pounce agen the update arrives in the inbox instead of complacently reading the summary and continuing.

Right now I'm marving at how this story, if I were to describe it to another FPress reader, would sound pretty normal. Typical high school story. But a) not it's not. I haven't read a plot exactly like this-it's a pretty nice twist- and b) the way you told the story was great. The voice was awesome and I couldn't help but love all your characters. Except Trevor. Jerk.

So thanks for writing this. This is definitely a story worth rereading.

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Hi, I've been a silent reader this whole time, and I loved it. Keep on writing!

a grand ending to a grand but short chapter. i give this 100 plus stars. Great job by the way!

You should write a spin off story on one of Ryder's siblings. That'd be interesting to read.
Anyways, this chapter was so cute! I loved that he proposed at the place she saved his life. This is the epilogue was perfect. I'm sad to see it end, but also glad there is one. Some stories on here leave you hanging for years and then never end up finishing it. Thank you for another awesome story! I can't wait for the next one!

OMG I think I'm literally tearing up right now. (And I thought I wasn't a softie) I love what you did with this. You are absolutely, positively awesome! And so is your writing! Again, You rock! Lol. Thanks for such an awesome story.

-Jillian

Yaaay you did another chapter woooohoooo, they're together. Now I can sleep peacefully at night. Keep writing!