|Reviews for Bete Noire|
| WhisperingZephyr chapter 3 . 1/16
Excellent exposition and plot. Dark, political, and well thought-out.
Great action scenes, btw.
Hope you continue. I want to see more.
| WhisperingZephyr chapter 2 . 12/24/2013
Good character development for Laurence; nice mixture of internal thoughts and external actions.
Less typos this time around. Only saw very few.
Keep on going.
| WhisperingZephyr chapter 1 . 12/23/2013
Fascinating thus far.
The imagery and description are wonderful, and the dialogue ranges from witty to deep.
Did notice a few typos, but they were few and far between.
Hope to see more of this.
| Strength of The Soul chapter 1 . 12/22/2013
An interesting start, certainly. So Laurence is a some sort of super-powered individual, yes? Perhaps a cyborg? Curiosity aside, I did notice a few italicization formatting marks. You may want to look over this and make sure what's supposed to italicize is actually doing so.