Reviews for Beauty
moonlight543 chapter 1 . 12/31/2013
Beautiful, beautiful imagery. Very nice language used and a lovely poem.
JasmineRaven chapter 1 . 12/23/2013
A very "beautiful" piece of poetry, and extremely well written and creative. Purely amazing for your first poem ever. I love it! This is going on my favourites list. :D Well done and keep up the amazing writing! :D
wordsaresodifficult chapter 1 . 12/22/2013
This is wonderful. I've thought something similar, but sometimes I just can't get the thoughts down in time. You did way better than I could have. Those parts that dealt with balance and "even in pain and suffering, you find beauty in that these give indication of life and emotion." You didn't need that comma between pain and suffering.
Keep Writing!
-Robin
ps. would you mind reading some of my poetry and telling me what you think? you don't have to if you don't want to though.