This is a funny scene where a big battle didn't happen because a wannabe Bruce Lee was too clumsy and stupid to do things right.
I like the failed interactions between the characters and how ridiculous the situation is evolving.

Uh, is everything in script-like dialogue? To be honest, I prefer prose a lot more, so I'm a bit bothered by this. I can't say I enjoy so much dialogue, to be honest.

Lol Botch lee. That was gold, suprised it's his real name though. What were his parents thinking?! Anyway I liked this chapter a lot. Nice getting to see Kyoko here and I liked Miyu too. Don't think getting the cake back will be as easy as the bros think, haha.

Also keep forgetting to say this but while I think a some people might be turned off by the script style, I actually really like it. Just makes it way easier for me to read instead of something that has too much prose. Also really liked getting to see Botch's fail fight at the end there lol. It was a good chapter.

Oh that's right, I really liked Kenshin. Montage with him beating people down was hillarious as was the fact that Sachiko's brother went to go train in the mountains over losing a school fight, haha. Sachiko's tsundereness was pretty funny too. Also I remember it being mentioned that Maxtaro cared for Kenshin a lot and everything but it's really nice seeing that accentuated here.

I really like Haruki as well. He should have stayed, haha. And Maxtaro is great as always of course. But man all this fuss over a cake. Involving "Ninjas" and such. Watch someone just knock the cake down when this is all over, would be such a troll move lol. It was a very enjoyable chapter, nice job.

I have to agree on bromance vibe here, cracked me up in reading. I'm still not biggest fan of the script setup, it's main thing that throws off my flow. That said, do like just how over the top things are and the getting of weapons. If this were something else, I might complain, but really, this just being an insane gag that I've come to accept it.

Please update more quickly... xp

Pff... truck. Talk about dynamic entry.

The cake is going to make their parents forgive a wrecked truck? Hue.

Second dynamic entry.

Huh, it ended already? Well... looks like this whole chapter is a buildup, with people coming in left and right, and talking. The crashing vehicles and the demonic aura were memorable, but others... aren't so much for me. Maybe you'd need catchier lines.

Still, so it's all heading to a climax, huh? Here's waiting warmly for one that's going to be a blast of an ending.

Till next time, Pogo.

Man all of these cool-ass sounding characters are frigging awesome. Is it strange that I'm already favoring Mosuke? I've always favored swordsman in any manga so yeah, you got me. Mosuke and the incident with the car...anime material there. Akira seems like an ass, or maybe that's just his way of being affectionate to Nagase. Kinda tsundere-ish or something. I can't decide on whether Tatsu is really tough against everyone BUT people like Kenshin and etc. I mean compared to rivals he's strong, but when compared to everyone in the group, he's one of the weaker? I couldn't really decide since Akira seems to have little respect for him? Or something, maybe I read it out to myself all wrong. Also, Freddy seemed so tough of an opponent but I guess everyone calls Kenshin a monster for a reason eh? Seems so. Hope all's well that ends well with Mosuke and his (lover?) Tomo...good stuff once more. Maxtaro beating down the Crow guys with moves he didn't really want to use against them because they belonged to his aunt Ami. Awesome. Later then.

Kenshin and Maxtaro are awesome. Kenshin the unbeatable brute with a questionable level of intelligence...literally...very questionable...Maxtaro the younger brother and less renowned one of the duo, yet powerful and monstrous in even his own right. Kenshin is the big boss of Kaimon as far as delinquents and fighting go, or at least he was I assume until he graduated since it hasn't mentioned yet that he's still in school like his little brother. He's in college right? Freshman level I'm assuming? Maxtaro is a Senior in High School. I forget the high school now. All I remember is Seikon High. Hikari, I didn't really get much from him. He seems like a friend of sorts, yet not overly close like Tatsu, who seems to be pretty close with Kenshin, though in that manly/brotherly/tough sort of way that can be hard to read at times. It seems to work for him though. Botch Lee...that name is awesome. I'm assuming the older brother Kachi is back. If so, I wonder what this entails for Sachiko.

I don't get the hint that Sachiko and Kachi will have a power struggle in the Ryuusei Clan that erupts into a civil war since she seems to in her own way, adore and look up top her older brother. Nobita, that guy is...in my eyes, a little more shady than he comes off of. He reminds me of that last boss in the game kind of thing, yet all throughout the game you never once give him more than a glance because he just doesn't seem really all that important. Freddy to me is the typical mid-way through the game kinda boss whose tougher than any of those in the first half of the game, and may be within the top 3 strongest enemies in the game. I don't know why, but I can't help but relate this to a game somehow. I hope that's okay and it makes sense to you somehow.

I just remembered the high school Kaimon High right? I got curious earlier and will be looking these names up to see if they even exist XD. Kyoko and Akari have been kidnapped now too XD. Poor Sachiko when Maxtaro and Kenshin get ahold of her. Probably poor Nobita when he tries to defend her and if it really is Kachi, Sachiko's older bro...well then poor him as well...

I'm over half way done, I've done 5, and only have 4 chapters remaining and I will finish these tomorrow...or rather today I suppose technically. It's 4:30 AM and I haven't slept yet. Later dude.

Botch Lee is the greatest character of all time! xDDD Just the name alone is gold~! I love this dude and his fails, omgosh. xDDDD

The parts with Kyoko & Maxtaro and Kenshin & Akari were so cute with the gifts~! I like how the girls know what they're doing in regards to them, and the boys are totally oblivious. xD I'd like to think that upon seeing something he thinks Kyoko would love, Maxtaro would buy it and give it to her. ;3; So cutes~

Another great chapter, Pogo! U

OMGOSH, THE BUDGET NINJAS~! LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL *dies* That is my all time favorite part. xDD I love how Sachiko told the others not to kill the two and they start firing guns immediately. xDDD

I like Nobita. He's so adorbs. xD & Haruki cracks me up too.

& THE CAR DOOR! LOLZ~ Love it! xDDDD

LOL~! All of this over a cake. xDDD It cracks me up! Maxtaro and Kenshin are definitely brothers & I absolutely love their drunk Aunt. Sachiko seems like a pretty interesting character so far. I wonder why she wanted the cake so badly and why she doesn't seem to like Kenshin. xD Nice job as always, Pogo~ :D

This is hilariously ridiculous. All of this for a cake. They are attacked by ninjas, hockey player, etc. for beating Sachiko's brother.
There's also some random things butting in the story a little like family guy. Just need superman coming for the bounty and they will be screwed.

I feel like I probably shouldn't be reading this without having read the main story...but oh well lol. Anyway, I really like the humor in this (Shounen Jump lol). Definitely like Kenshin and the bribing with sweets and whatnot. Fight at the cake shop was epic. Pretty neutral towards Maxtaro so far. But man if their mom is where they get their strength from, I can see why they are scared XD.

Didn't find myself really into this chapter as I'm really not invested in the romance side of things here. This chapter was pretty eh in comparison to the others, sadly. Not much to report back as of now so far that hasn't already been said.

- Sachiko is officiall fave now, makes me think of some weird combo between Satsuki from Kill la Kill and tsundere stereotypes. Given just how silly and over the top obvious this is meant to be, the tsundere stuff made me more laugh at it's clicheness. XD
- The voices kind of blend together at some points, at least with the brothers.
- Parts where dialogue is slowed by unnecessary tells because the dialogue itself shows this, like (baffled) Seriously? This comes back to how your tag uses really kills the pacing big time.
- Laughing so hard at the bounty and Haruki's reaction.
- BUDGET NINJAS?!
- And Kenshin's gone insane blood knight. Alright, this is gold. XD

Really, for you, the content has been great comedy, just a matter of execution of the prose that's holding you back.