I feel sad to read such interesting unfinished stories..

Her taking sandwitch for her father was sweet...

Please continue this story! You have greatly improved your writing, please continue this story to continue to grow in your writing skills and for the joy of writing :) I look forward to future chapters! Hope this review finds you well!

Hey, I read your previous story and I just say that you have developed it even better in this rewrite. I love it an will follow it even though I noticed that you haven't written in a long time. It's a pity, because you write beautifully. Please consider bringing this back. I know it might feel weird after so long, but you'll be doing your readers a service by not giving up on the story yet.

Cheers.

Hey, I know you haven't written on this story in a long time. I love it though and was hoping you'd consider continuing it. Thanks for a great read.

This is so good. I am devastated that there is no more. I hope you will update soon.

This story is AMAZING! I love the character development, each character grows so perfectly. Keeping up the good work. :)

I love it ;-)

I liked the date scene - it was cute! I hope to see them learning more about each other.

I enjoyed reading Wolfy Insticnts more :( I kind of enjoyed both, I really liked the plot line, but it would have been better if I were forewarned about it not being complete and rewritten. But both stories will go on my favorites; that's what I do after any story I enjoy or partly enjoy.

Love this chapter and so glad to see it out so soon! The interactions between Avery and Jayda are much more natural than in the original. (I still love the original, though!) I can't wait for the next chapter. I can't offer any college advice, but will need it next year. I live in Indiana... Now I'm curious. :)

Once again u made my day - :-) thank for for this quick update! Oooh i hope there will be some more tension in this story! The phone call was good but i want mooooore! Lol and i wish u a terrific college start- whenever that is... And i took your encouraging words to heart and continued with my own story :-)

This story is great! I love the relationship between Avery and Jay, but for me i think the date was a little fast, other than that i love the story and the fact it's about werewolf.

The Date was really fun to read-not too sappy and definitely not boring. I'm really excited about how far Jayda and Avery have come. This re-written story shows how far you've come as a writer and I'm glad I've witness a bit of that. I can't wait for the next chapter...really! Happy Writing!

Great chapter and yes, it was soon enough for me lol! For college I suggest getting a wall organizer with lots of pockets that you can hang inside your closet and Command Hooks to hold it (5lb ones)! It's $20 at Bed Bath & Beyond! I've used mine for 2 years now & it was the best $20 I spent! For a roommate, I suggest setting some ground rules you can agree on! For classes, organize a calendar for when stuff is due & color code classes on it! Work ahead on homework when you can, study a week or two before tests/exams/quizzes and you'll do fine! Shoot for that 3.0 because it's hard to pull up your GPA after (I have to work 3X as hard for As and Bs so it was hard for me). I'm sure you'll do great! Enjoy your 4 years of self discovery and follow your dreams/passions! Have fun!