Reviews for Believe It
KittenexMachina chapter 1 . 2/10
This is really good. It really caught my attention! I would point out, if you don't mind, that there are a few typos like "pauses" at the beginning. And when something like "he said" or "she asked" follows dialogue, you make the period a comma. Also, it's hard to keep up with the tense you're using. I see present tense mostly, but I also see a lot of past tense especially with the dialogue like "Jane yelled."

Overall this is a very nice introduction. I feel that the transitions are a bit abrupt, but that could just be me. XD Nice work, though. The pacing was nice. And I can't wait to see more of these colorful characters. :)
Anonym1919 chapter 5 . 1/24/2014
Ohh, and the plot thickens. I'm really looking foward to another update
TheStarsAreMyCanvas chapter 5 . 1/22/2014
Nice job! Like it!
Anonym1919 chapter 4 . 1/15/2014
Pretty sure I'm going to PM you right after writing this but I want to leave a review anyway. I'm a fan of horror stories and I really like this one, I will definetley keep an eye out for an update!