|Reviews for The Magnificents|
| imtheonlyonly chapter 1 . 1/4
Write more! I love it!
| FixedUrFic chapter 1 . 1/4
This feels more like a third or fourth chapter than a first one. Didn't catch your protagonists name at any point, or what she looks like, and Spica's introduction comes right out of nowhere. What was the protagonist's life like before coming to the university? Why is she so reluctant? The reader knows next to nothing about the protagonist's character and motivations at this point, so it's kind of hard to get invested. Furthermore, what does a superhero school look like? It can't be exactly like a normal campus but you haven't given very many details.
Your premise is cool, but everything else needs some more fleshing out.